Preview the First Two Chapters of Forever in 24 Hours

Happy Monday! I am excited to release the revised version of the first two chapters of my new book Forever in 24 Hours. I have been working on this book for the last two years and am super excited to be making the final revisions! As of right now, I do not have a release date. However, I will get the word out once it has been published! I hope you enjoy the first two chapters and anticipate the release of the full novel!

Thank you again for reading and happy Monday!

Chapter 1

     Glancing around great-aunt Maggie’s dimly lit home, dust swirled around the snow-white light streaming through the red curtains. It honestly made them look pink. I could hear Momma in the back room sifting through boxes of Maggie’s belongings. Box after box, dust clouds began to creep their way into the living room, where I sat. I was sad that Maggie was going to be locked away for the rest of her days. Maggie was too good for a nursing home. 

     Great-aunt Maggie is the type of older lady who uses plastic couch covers and watches black and white TV shows in the dark, while eating popcorn. She’s an old soul, stuck in the ’80’s. I could never lose her in a crowd. She’s always been the bigger, taller lady with the teased blonde hair, dark roots, red lips, and red fingernails. If her hair looked good red, she would have dyed it red too. 

     I’m SO bored, I thought to myself. There were a million other things I could be doing besides collecting dust, along with all of Maggie’s other belongings. Just then, my phone buzzed. I adjusted myself on Maggie’s sticky couch and pulled my phone from my pocket to read the notification. It was a text from Johanna.

    It read: Want to come stay the weekend?

    As one can imagine, I was elated to have received this message. I had been sitting in the same spot for hours staring at the fake wood paneling, pink carpet, and bright red curtains, for what felt like an eternity.

    “Mooooooooooommmmmm!” I yelled.

    From the back room and walking down the hall toward me, I saw my tired mother. She had dust all over her red and green ugly Christmas sweater. She also had cobwebs in her black bob haircut that contained random sprigs of gray.

    “Whew! What a mess!” Momma said, dusting herself off. “What do you need, honey?”

    “Can I stay with Johanna this weekend?”

    Momma wiped her hands on a washcloth nearby, replacing it on the kitchen counter, and replied with, “Of course, Mara. Would you like me to take you or do you want to walk?”

    “I think I’ll walk,” I suggested, acting as though I wasn’t in a hurry to get out of there, but I really was.

    “Okay. Text me when you’re there and be home by 4 on Sunday, in time for supper.” 

    I nodded, afraid to say anything else so she wouldn’t change her mind or add another condition to our agreement. Momma mentioned having to get back to work sifting through what Aunt Maggie would want to keep, put in storage, or get rid of, and disappeared into the back room of the house once more.

     Pulling myself off of the sticky couch to leave, I heard a loud thump in the bathroom. Thinking nothing of it, I took a few more steps toward the front door. 

     As soon as I was able to see through its diamond shaped windows to the outside world, I heard an even more loud thump that came from the bathroom directly behind me. Taking this noise much more seriously, my teenage heart began to pound. If momma’s in the back, who or what could be in the bathroom?    

     Thoughts and guesses ran through my mind as I turned around to face the bathroom. Hearing smaller thumps, I hoped it was something cute, like a puppy. With each step further, the noise grew louder. I reached for the small golden handle, ready to smash a mouse or cuddle a puppy at the very moment it decided to reveal itself. Before I could pull the door completely open, Aunt Maggie stepped out in her pink bathrobe with a red towel on her head. Along with her, there came a cloud of perfume, makeup, and hairspray.

    “Well! Hello, Button!” Aunt Maggie said, holding her hand out. Her nails were painted bright red and she held out her hand for me to kiss, as though she were royalty.

    I wasn’t amused. Being 16, nothing really gets to me. I don’t usually get excited over things or sweat the small stuff. I’m sure by the expression on my face, Aunt Maggie knew that I wasn’t in the mood. “I thought you were-”

    Before I could finish, Aunt Maggie interrupted, “SHOPPING! You thought I was shopping? On a day like this? No, child. We’re going on a trip!” Maggie let down her blond hair from the towel. It was freshly curled. How it formed perfectly from a wet towel, I’ll never know. Taking off her robe, underneath, she revealed her favorite bright red button-up jumpsuit. “Oh! One more thing, Darling. I can’t forget my bright red lipstick!” she shouted.

    Maggie stepped into the bathroom and applied thick coats of bright red lipstick in front of a ginormous mirror. I saw this as an opportunity and glanced down the hall where mom was still going through boxes. Every now and then, I would hear something fall and break. Evidently, she paid no mind to Maggie’s crazy antics or she didn’t hear anything that just transpired. 

    Turning my attention back to Maggie, I nervously said, “I’m supposed to stay with Johanna this weekend. Where are you wanting to go?”

    “Oh, Honey. That’s great. Hey, listen. Don’t tell your momma any different, okay? If she finds out I’m taking you to my special place, she may have a conniption fit,” She voiced to me while mushing her lips together, moving her eyes from the mirror, to me, and back to the mirror.

    “What is a conniption? And what is going on?” I was confused and couldn’t understand what was happening at this point. “You want me to go away with you for the weekend? What about mom? What about going through some of your old stuff?” My voice was louder, but we were still conversing at a whisper. 

    “Button, first of all, you don’t want to know what a conniption is. Second, your momma will be just fine. She wants to put me in that nursing home and Lord knows it’s gonna happen. Can’t I just have one last fun weekend with my favorite great-niece before I’m locked up in that place forever? I don’t care about my stuff. Besides, your momma will be here all weekend going through it. So….. what do you say?” Maggie’s eyes shimmered with hope and excitement. I swear I could see stars in them.

    Skeptical of her promises, I asked, “What kind of special place?”

    “Oh, Button. I’m so glad you asked! It’s a beautiful cabin in the Range Mountains. It’s at a beautiful place called Lit Moon Lake. My family used to vacation there when I was a child.” Maggie lowered her voice and moved closer to my face. Her breath smelled like Spearmint gum. “They have all sorts of fun things you teenagers like to do.”

      I thought long and hard for a moment. The only thing I do at Johanna’s is watch movies. Nothing exciting ever happens at her house. Seeing the gleam in Aunt Maggie’s eyes made me want to see what kind of fun she had in mind. “Okay,” I agree. “Just let me tell mom good-bye.”

    With the news of my agreement, Maggie clapped and jumped up and down saying, “Just don’t mention me, please. If she still thinks I’m out shopping, she knows I’m crazy enough to shop all weekend. She won’t even miss me.”

    Still skeptical of Maggie’s whole plan, but having an innate need for adventure, I yelled back to Mom, “BYEEE! I love you! See you Sunday!” Maggie winked at me, and I back at her.

    “GOODBYE, SWEETIE! LOVE YOU TOO!” Mom yelled.

    When I twirled around to face the door, Maggie was already standing there, donning her bright red puffy jacket with the fur on the hood. In her hand were the keys to her red ‘80’s model Mustang that sat in the garage attached to the left of the house. She jingled them enticingly and smiled. I rolled my eyes and walked past her, opening the front door and headed outside.

    Once we found ourselves in the driveway to Maggie’s suburban home, we pulled our jackets tighter around us to fend off the cold. Maggie tried to hide behind me, hunching over, as we walked to the garage. Her attempt to hide from all her neighbors was obvious. God, love Maggie’s heart. She is just a little bigger than I am. She is taller and more round, but that’s just who she is. She is my Maggie and I am glad to have her.

    Standing before the gigantic garage door, Maggie and I began to giggle. Being mischievous was kind of fun, even with my crazy aunt.

    Pointing to the garage door, Maggie instructed, “Turn the handle one-half turn clockwise and lift up.”

    Following her instructions, the garage door began to lift, and the cold light seeped in to reveal a vehicle covered with a black tarp. I pulled the heavy tarp off the car and sat it in the corner of the garage nearest to the entrance. Maggie threw me the keys and we both jumped into the car excitedly.

    I shoved the keys into the ignition and turned them, but nothing happened. Our smiles and excitement faded from both of our faces. Maggie glanced around, taking notice of the untouched red leather interior and the glossy red hood.

    “What’s this?” I asked, pointing to the shifter that was located below the elbow rest. It wasn’t next to the steering wheel like the ones I was used to and it had numbers on it.

    “OHHH! HA HA HA!” Maggie burst into uncontrollable laughter. “You kids these days. I don’t know how you survive. It’s a G-E-A-R S-H-I-F-T-E-R!” She said, slowly so that my fragile teen mind could understand.

    “Your car is a manual?!” I yelled. “How am I supposed to drive this thing?! Why don’t you drive, Aunt Maggie?”

    “Oh, no, dear. The coordination between my feet and hands is a little off these days. There’s no time like the present to learn!” Immediately, Maggie released the e-brake and the car began to roll back.

    “Aunt Maggie, what do I do?!” I was in a panic and the street was coming up close in the rear-view mirror. I kept the steering wheel straight to avoid the snow-covered grass on either side of the driveway.

    “The middle pedal down there is your brake. The far left is the clutch. The far right is the gas. Just ease on the brake for right now and let me close the garage door.”

    Taking a deep breath, I eased on the brake and Maggie exited the car to manually close the garage door. All of the excitement made me forget how cold it was out. Looking through all the knobs on the dash, I found the air and turned it to red, hoping it meant heat. Maggie quickly hopped back into the car. From the looks of the way the was moving, one might suggest she could audition for a James Bond remake. “Okay, Button, you ready?”

    “I’m not sure.” I admitted, clueless to the whole manual thing.

    “Now, see how I can wiggle the gear shift?” Maggie asked, tossing it in her hand side-to-side. “That means the car is in neutral. So, if you’ll let it roll back a little further, you can back out into the street.”

    Letting off the brake, I could feel the car slowly roll back.

    “Now, start turning the wheel, because the driveway is perpendicular to the street, and so when we give it some gas, we can take off in the right direction!” Maggie said, assisting me in turning the wheel.

    “I know how to drive, Maggie. I’ve been doing it for a few months, you know.”

    “Well, that’s nothing compared to the fifty-some years I have under my belt, so shush your mush and get to work.”

    We both turned to look out the back window and once the tires hit the street, I turned the wheel back to straight, so we would face the direction we needed to go.

    “Now, hold that brake AND the clutch at the same time and watch this!” Maggie announced. 

     After I held them down, she shoved the gear shift as far as she could toward me and then forward. “Now, you’re going to have to ease off the brake and the clutch while adding gas.”

    “What?! How do you do that?!” I was very nervous again.

    “And that, my darling, is why you teenagers don’t bother with a manual transmission. Come on, give her some gas!” Maggie threw her hands in the air, ready for a ride.

    Growing up watching Maggie drive her red Mustang gave me a basis for how to drive it myself. But, it wasn’t as easy as she made it look. I let off the brake a little and the car began to roll back. I freaked out and slammed on the brake again. “I can’t do it! I can’t do it!” I screamed.

    “Calm down, child. We are on a flat street. It’s not like you’re going to roll far. Just take your foot off the brake and ease on the gas. When you’ve eased on the gas, let off the clutch slowly. You’ll feel it start to grab.”

    “What does that mean?!” My heart was racing. I didn’t want the car to grab anything.

    “I’m not entirely sure, but that’s what the car salesman told me when I bought her.”

    “You learned to drive your car from the man you bought it from?!”

    “Hey, you’re learning from your crazy great-aunt. So, I can’t say much for you either.”

    “Touche,” I told her, rolling my eyes. I then did exactly what she said, and the car began to roll forward.

    “Whooo Hooo! Alright, Button! There’s a stop sign down here. You’re gonna have to push in the clutch and the brake at the same time, so you don’t kill it.”

    “Kill it? I don’t think I’ve ever killed anything in my life!”

    “If the car is stopped and the clutch isn’t pushed down, the car will quit, die, bite the dust, what have you.” Maggie was very dramatic with her hand gestures.

    Coming up to the stop sign, I eased on the clutch and then the brake and came to a stop just beyond the stop sign.

    “Not bad! I’d say you’ll be a pro by the time we make it there! Now, when pulling out, do all of that again. You know, letting off the brake and giving it a little gas while letting off the clutch.”

    As soon as I followed her strict orders, the car stalled. “Oh, no. What did I do?” I asked.

    “This is normal. I didn’t expect you to take off right in the beginning. You aren’t completely like me, you know.” Maggie winked and advised me to push in the clutch and brake again and to restart the car. The engine roared as though it hadn’t been fired in quite some time and was happy to be set free. “Now, ease off the clutch and brake and give her some gas.”

    Again, I followed Maggie’s instructions, but didn’t give it enough gas before the clutch was all the way out. So, as one can guess, the car jerked forward a few times and stalled again. Frustrated, I laid my head on the steering wheel and took a deep breath. “Let’s just go home,” I said. But then, I felt a buzzing in my pocket. It was Mom calling.

    I looked at Maggie before answering, she mouthed the words, don’t tell her I’m here.

    “Hello,” I said, nervously.

    “Oh. Hi, Honey. I was calling to see if you made it to Johanna’s house.” I could hear Momma still throwing boxes around in the background.

    Maggie shook her head up and down. I continued, “Uh, ummm, yeah. Yeah, Mom. I’m here.”

    “Oh, good. I was beginning to get worried. I’ve just been making some calls to Aunt Maggie’s doctors. I wanted to update them since they told her to go on bed rest a month ago. Of course, she never listened to them, but I wanted to let them know she will no longer be here.”

    Maggie overheard Mom and mouthed silently to me, “Hence, the nursing home,” and sighed. She threw her arms in the air demonstrating disappointment.

    “Oh, right. Okay. Um, love you, Mom,” I said in a hurry. 

    “I won’t keep you. I know you girls will have fun gossiping and doing your nails, or whatever you girls do. If you need me, call me. Love you, baby.”

    “Love you, Mom,” I said, ending the call.

    “Whew!” Aunt Maggie sighed. “Now that was a close one!”

    “You’re telling me! Now, how do I start this thing again?”

    “Now, that’s the spirit! Ease off the clutch and give her enough gas to begin to roll.”

    The car began to roll forward, causing Maggie to get excited. “That’s it, baby! Now, let that clutch fly!”

    Removing my foot from the clutch and pressing harder on the gas, the car began to roar and speed up.

    “Now you get to learn the art of changing gears. Which, if you’ll just hold down the clutch, I’ll do it for you.”

    “Please! I think I’ve had enough of this car for one day.” I said, cruising down 4th street at a slow but steady rate while avoiding small patches of snow still in the road.

    “Okay. When you hear the car get loud and that red hand over there gets near 3, push in the clutch while the car is rolling and I’ll put her in second gear. Be sure to let off the gas while pushing in the clutch.”

    As soon as I let off the gas and pushed in the clutch, Maggie forced the gear shift into second gear and the car made a loud grinding sound. “I want to SCREAM, MAGGIE!” I yelled. The car slowed down, and I applied the gas once more, so it wouldn’t stall again.

    “Trust me, Button. This is gonna be the hardest part of your weekend. If you can do this, you can do anything. Besides, you teenagers give up too easily.”

    Frustrated, I growled under my breath and mashed down the clutch as hard as I could. “Don’t forget to let off the gas completely!” Maggie yelled.

    Sure enough, the car glided into second gear. Then Maggie yelled, “Now, let off the clutch and floor it!”

    “We’re cruising now, Aunt Maggie!” I said, giggling and excited. However, my few moments of excitement turned into worry when I saw the gas gauge indicating low fuel.

    I looked over to Maggie, who was smiling while watching all the houses go by. “Maggie?” I said under my breath, trying not to disturb her from the winter wonderland she had escaped to.

    “Oh. Sorry. I was just daydreaming,” Maggie said glancing out the window and back to me. “What do you need, Dear?”

    “Umm… We are almost out of gas.”

Chapter 2

     Maggie and I were lucky that it was later in the evening when we made our escape. In my town, because it gets dark early in the winter, no one ventures out past four p.m. You could say that I live in a community of older folks who moved up this way to retire. I say that because most of Aunt Maggie’s neighbors are retired. A few blocks down, the same can be said for my neck of the woods.

    “Stop right here,” Maggie said, motioning to Steve’s Stop and Go Mart. “They’re the only ones around here that do not put water in their gas.”

    I had no clue what Maggie was talking about, but I held the clutch in as she shifted the car down each gear, until we came to a rolling stop beside the gas pump. Aunt Maggie put the car in neutral and pulled the e-brake back. “Now, shut the car off,” she instructed.

    I turned the key and unbuckled. My new-found freedom left me when I realized that I was only 16 and had no way to pay for the gas we needed.

    Realizing my dilemma, Maggie shouted, “Oh! Right! You’ll have to use my credit card. I’m all out of cash.” She searched through the house she carried inside her purse and produced none other than a bright red leather wallet. Searching through her stash of cards like files in a filing cabinet, she pulled her final selection. “This one ought to do it. Fill her up to the top.”

    I nodded nervously. Fortunately, I knew how to pump gas, even though I had only done it once or twice before. Stepping out into the cold, the air hit me like a brick wall. My breath produced white clouds that faded away a few seconds after they were exhaled. If no one knew any better, it could have looked as though I was a heavy smoker. 

     Stepping up to the pump on the passenger’s side of the bright red car, I slid Maggie’s card in the slot. To my surprise, a big fat DENIED showed up on the screen.

    “Turn it around, silly! It can’t read the strip if it’s turned the wrong way!” Maggie giggled, shaking her head.

    Taking a deep breath, I swiped the card again, the right way. After a few moments of the word “PROCESSING…” blinking, it told me to “BEGIN FUELING”. I unscrewed the gas cap and placed the nozzle inside, choosing premium fuel, according to Aunt Maggie’s specific request.

    While fueling, Maggie rolled down her window again and stuck her head out this time. “You can go get us something to drink and snacks for the road, if you are up for it?”

    “Is it legal for me to use your card?” I’m only 16 and do NOT want to go to jail.

    “Oh, right. Just use this cash then,” Maggie motioned her arm outward, out the window, to express her obvious knowledge on the subject.

    Nodding my head side to side, I figured it would be nice to have some chips and soda for the road. “Anything you want in particular?” I asked her.

    “Diet Coke and a Pay Day for me, please.”

    As I put on the gas cap, I reflected on the fact that I never understood Maggie’s need for anything that contained the word diet. She always ate what she wanted. From pizza and burgers, to tacos and enchiladas, Great-Aunt Maggie always paired her food with a Diet Coke. Deciding it was none of my concern how she ate or drank, unless it affected me, I took the cash from her and  trudged into the store.

    Behind the counter was a scrawny old man wearing a brown cap with the name of a construction company on it. I knew he must have spent a lot of time in the sun, in his younger days, because his skin was like dark wrinkled leather. His red and black plaid shirt gave him the appearance of a lumberjack. He gave me a blank stare while I searched the shelves for our favorite goodies. I thought by now he would ask if I needed anything, but Momma once told me that he fought off a couple of robbers with his bare hands. So, he, or I, could just be paranoid.

    I laid out all of my items for him to scan. A few bottles of soda, a few bags of chips, and a few candy bars cluttered his otherwise pristine counter. 

    “Will this be all?” he asked.

    “That’s it.” I said, getting nervous by his suspicion of me. Or maybe I was nervous because I knew what I was doing was wrong, and I didn’t want to get caught.

    “Your total is eleven dollars and seventy-two cents.”

    I pulled Maggie’s money out of my pocket and handed it to him. From front to back, he examined it closely. 

     It was so quiet I could hear the clock on the wall ticking away. I wondered if he would find a problem with my money, or the fact that I was a kid and alone.

     Before my paranoia turned into panic, he popped the drawer open and started counting back my change. 

     “Five dollars and twenty-eight cents is your change.”

     In a hurry, I grabbed the money and bags of junk food from the counter and headed toward the door. “Thank you!” I yelled.

    “You have a great night and stay warm,” he said.

    Delighted that the transaction went through and in a hurry to leave, I quickly blurted, “You too,” and ran out the door with the merchandise.

    “Whoo hooo! You did it, Button! I was losing hope there for a minute!” Maggie wailed from the passenger seat of the car.

    I plopped myself back into the driver’s seat and gave Maggie a stern stare. “That was nerve-wracking!”

    “We don’t have time for that, Button,” She said. “Let’s get on the road before we really get caught!”

    After opening my soda and my favorite chips, Maggie worked the gear shift and we rolled on down the road.

    Once we hit the highway, Maggie said I wouldn’t have to change gears for a while, so we ‘cruised in fifth’ and munched on our snacks.

    “So, where are we going, again?” I asked, feeling pieces of chips sprinkle the breast of my shirt.

    “Lit Moon Lake, the most beautiful place on earth,” Maggie said, with her mouth full of junk.

     Range Valley, where I live, is a beautiful mountain town that is just outside of the Range Mountains. The Range Mountains have been compared to The Great Smoky Mountains, but on a smaller scale. Yet, it still has dinner theaters, skiing and snowboarding, fine dining, shopping, a night life, countless family-friendly activities, and best of all, Lit Moon Lake. I always wanted to visit there one day. 

     My town, the town of Range Valley has coffee shops, a shopping mall, a movie theater, and a few restaurants. For most of my life, this town has been quiet, except for tourists coming through to visit Lit Moon Lake.

    “Why on earth are we going there?” I inquired further.

    “Well, for one, it’s close. For two, it’s special to me and while I’m in the nursing home I won’t be able to visit there. So, for my last ‘hoorah!’, before being locked away, I wanted to see my favorite place on earth.”

    I didn’t really know how to respond to that. Suddenly, I felt great remorse for Aunt Maggie. It must be tough giving up all your belongings and moving to a facility you would never be able to leave. Not knowing what to say, I just kept driving, following the lines on the road illuminated by the beams of the headlights.

    “I’m gonna be okay, Button. You know that, right?” Maggie laid her hand on mine, which was rested on the unfamiliar gear shift.

    “I’m gonna miss you,” I said, trying not to avoid the negative mood. Some things just need to be discussed.

    “Oh, honey bunny. I’m going to be just a few miles away. Your momma says I’ll be better off there, but I guess we will see.”

    “Why can’t you just stay with us?”

    “Mara, pretty soon I’m going to be a big burden. That’s something I will never be to you and your momma.” Her eyes were serious.

    “You would never be a burden. You have helped us through the years, through mom’s divorce from Carl and the death of Grandma Rose. It wouldn’t hurt for us to be there for you.” 

     I felt a tear stream down my cheek at the thought of losing one of my closest family members. Aunt Maggie isn’t just a great aunt. She’s the sister I never had, one of my best friends, and the best grandmother figure I’ve ever had, since Grandma Rose passed away when I was young.  

    “Whether you want me to or not, I have to go. That’s all there is to it. If you want to come see me while I’m in that hell hole, you’re more than welcome. If not, I understand why a teenager like you wouldn’t want to be in a place like that.”

    “What do you mean? Of course I will come visit you! I’ll sneak your favorite junk to you!” My excitement from the surprise of her response jolted me enough to raise my hand from the steering wheel, causing the car to veer into the left lane. Quickly, Maggie grabbed the wheel and guided the car back into the right lane.

    “Calm your horses, Button. If you get too excited, I may as well make a spot in the nursing home for you too!” Maggie laughed.

    “At least we will have this weekend together. I’m glad that I can spend it with you.” I said, hoping this weekend would never end.

    “Me too, Button. Me too.”

– – – – –

    A few more miles down the road, and after Maggie and I played a few rounds of terrible karaoke while singing along to the radio, the highest peak of the Range Mountains, Mount Point, came into view.

    “There it is. That’s where we’re going,” Maggie said, pointing her long red nails in the direction of the mountain.

    “Isn’t it covered in snow? Your car will never make it up there.”

    “They keep the roads scraped, silly. But first, we have to stop for a burger. I’m starving. Take the next exit.”

    Following her orders, I took the next exit off the not-so-busy highway. The car slowed and I made a right, following the signs to the nearest burger joint.

    “Is this good enough?” I asked, considering the broken-down condition of the facility.

    “This will do. I’m starving. Aren’t you starving?!” Aunt Maggie said, rubbing her stomach.

    “Not really, but I’ll eat.” I shrugged.

    “Oh, that’s right. I forgot. You teenagers don’t eat, or the girls don’t anyway.” Maggie rolled her eyes while I pulled up to the speaker in the drive-through to order. She carefully examined the menu and then asked, “What do you want?”

    “I don’t know. It doesn’t matter.” My patience was growing thin. I had hoped we would be at the cabin by now.

    “Okay, order 5 cheeseburgers with ketchup only, two orders of fries, and two medium Diet Cokes.”

    “Got it,” I told her, even though I knew she had ordered enough for me too. Aunt Maggie was always the type to get her way, most of all, with people. She wasn’t pushy, it was just who she was.

    I ordered our food and pulled up to the window to pay. The cashier gave me a fishy look when I took the cash from Aunt Maggie and gave it to him. He didn’t seem to care too much, at least not like the last cashier. All he said was, “I don’t know where you’re going to put all of this food, little girl,” Then he quickly handed me our food and we were once again on our way.

     I wasn’t sure if he meant where I would put all of the food in the car, since it was so fancy and lacking cup holders or even back-seat space, or if he thought I was going to eat all of it.

    I had never tried to eat and drive at the same time, so I opted for fries and a drink. With a full belly and the time being much later in the night, my nerves started to set in. “Mom is not going to be happy about this if she finds out, Maggie,” I said, one hand on the wheel and the other full of fries.

    “What your mom doesn’t know won’t hurt her, Button. Besides, I get to spend some time with my favorite great-niece!”

     As far as I knew, I was her only great-niece. 

    The night had grown so dark that Maggie’s face was only illuminated by the lights in the dash and the headlights in front of us. I knew I was out too late and NOT where I told my mom I would be. I wanted more answers from Maggie. I took a deep breath and went for it. “Cut the crap. You could have taken any of your old buddies to your ‘special place’. Why me?! What’s so special about me!”

    Maggie nearly choked on her food, when she internalized my outburst. “I thought you would enjoy this time with me. Besides, most of my friends are in low places, if you get what I mean.” She winked, hoping she wouldn’t have to elaborate further. 

     I hoped she meant living in a basement or living their lives as hermits, but more obviously, she meant they were in the ground. To change the subject and also make her realize the depth of what we were doing, I added, “Maggie, I’m clearly temporarily running away to be with my crazy great-aunt, who is running from the nursing home!”

    “First of all, pre-Madonna, I am NOT running away from the nursing home. I am simply taking a detour, BUT I WILL make it there. Second of all, you will be back home on Sunday, by the time your mother told you to be. I don’t know why you’re freaking out. All is well. Be happy and let’s have fun!” Maggie rolled her window down enough to smoke and lit a cigarette. The excitement of the discussion and her full stomach set her nicotine cravings in full swing.

    I couldn’t help but roll my eyes. I am NO pre-Madonna, but I guess I should lighten up a bit. Running away with my aunt is much better than running away alone, or so I thought.

    “Besides, we need to talk,” Maggie said nervously, breathing out smoke.

    My heart sank. I knew it. She was bringing me all the way out here to lay something on me. Something big. “Why couldn’t you just talk to me at home?”

    “It’s not that simple, Button. Your mom will be the most affected by this. I figured I would lay it on you, and if I survived long enough, I’d lay it on her, eventually. And I really did want to get away before being locked away. I wonder if they’ll let me smoke, or have my nail polish and red lipstick.”

    I imagined Maggie, with an oxygen hose laying over her ears with the cannula inserted into her nose. I also imagined her standing outside, walker in hand, oxygen tank, and all, smoking away. Noticing my day dreaming, I returned to reality. “Oh, no. You are NOT changing the subject on me now, Maggie. Tell me. What’s all this about?!” I struggled to keep the Mustang on the road.

    Maggie shook her head. Her arm was resting on the window. She took a draw from her cigarette and placed her hand back next to the opening in the window. Blowing the smoke from her lungs, I could see she was about to cave. “I will explain everything when we get there. Don’t get too caught up in the secret, Button. This is also our last outing together. Please, just enjoy it with me. I promise, I will tell you everything.”

    I caved. I didn’t want to argue with my favorite person in the world. I did want to have fun this weekend. I was already breaking the rules. I should at least have fun doing it. Plus, if I was in a terrible mood, Aunt Maggie may not tell me what she brought me out all this way to tell me. My strategy, from here on out, is to stay calm, listen, and have fun. If anything bad comes my way, I will handle it when it gets here.

    “Okay,” I told her, nodding in agreement.

    “That’s my sweet snooker puss!” she said, tugging at my cheek. “Now, take the next exit. We are almost there!”

    Following her directions once more, I took the next exit. When I came to the stop sign, I noticed by the light of the moon that we were sitting at the foot of a large mountain.

    “Take a left right here and then the next right. It’s gonna be a steep climb, so we gotta keep ole’ girl here in a low gear, so she doesn’t give out on us.”

    “Got it,” I said, even though I had no clue what she was talking about. My mind was distracted by the sheer beauty of the sky and the reflection of the moon on the frozen snow. We passed under the bridge and made a right.

    “This road takes us almost straight up the mountain. It’s the quickest way to the cabin,” Maggie said, her voice beaming with more and more excitement the closer we got to our destination. 

    I kept my eyes on the moonlit road, but I also tossed them around to soak in the scenery. Thick woods covered both sides of the paved mountainous pathway. About a mile away and a few hundred feet higher, I could see the glow from what looked like a small town.

    “That’s Lit Moon Lake. That’s where we’re going.” There was an unprecedented amount of satisfaction in Maggie’s voice.

    “It’s… beautiful,” I said, still trying to focus on the road and take in the beauty before me. As we got closer, I could see the lake frozen and surrounded by cabins along its beach, which was covered in white snow. Then, surrounding the cabins, was the Range Mountains. A bright green aurora gleamed in the sky above the lake. Lights around the lake illuminated the circumference of the body of water and its beaches.

    “This is it! We’re here!” Aunt Maggie shouted. “Stop at this first cabin. It’s the office where you need to check in”.

    I pulled in front of the cabin and pulled the e-brake while Maggie put the car in neutral. “Can’t we just leave it in first and let it die right here?” I asked.

    “If you wouldn’t do that to me, you aren’t doing it to my precious car!” Maggie said. “I don’t want my transmission ruined.”

    Lost in Maggie’s car-talk again, I just dropped it, huffing. “So, what now?”

    “Walk in and ask for cabin number 12.” She handed me the cash and her license.

    “What’s the license for?”

    “They need a license on file if you rent anything on the property, so they can be sure they get any of their missing property back. I thought you may want to go horseback riding, rent a golf cart, or paddle boat.”

    I gave Maggie a smart look. There was no way I was riding horses on a snowy mountain or paddle boating on a frozen lake. For the sake of arguing, I took the card and exited the vehicle.

    Stepping up the three steps into the office, I could feel the warmth radiating from the cabin. Once inside, I was consumed with the suffocating heat from the wood stove. Behind the counter, I spotted an older gentleman in coveralls. The wall behind him was filled with keys, to the cabins, I guessed.

    “How can I help you, ma’am?”

    “I’m here to stay in cabin number 12, please.”

    “Oh. You’re Maggie’s niece. She told me you would be coming. I’m glad to see you’ve made it safely. She said you would have her license and cash for payment.”

    “Yes. Here they are.”

    He gently took them from my hand and placed them on the wooden counter. The fingers of his gloves were missing, exposing his fleshly digits as they punched the keys on the keyboard one at a time. “Here’s your key. There’s a road that runs behind all the cabins. Follow it until you reach number 12. Enjoy your stay.”

    Grabbing the card and key and shoving them in my pocket, I ran back out the Mustang. What I found was nothing short of hilarious. Maggie must not have seen me watching her, because she was dancing to the music so much that she shook the entire car. The music was so loud, I was afraid she would wake the customers in the nearby cabins.

    I quickly swung the car door open and plopped myself in the driver’s seat to turn down the music.

    “What?! I was having fun!”

    I smiled, amused at her joy. I then dangled the #12 cabin keys in front of her face. “You ready?” I asked. 

    “Ready as I’ll ever be,” she said with a deep breath. “Let’s go.”

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     Synopsis:

Confused by the sudden offer from her Great Aunt Maggie to run away for the weekend, 16 year-old Mara is thrilled and suspicious. Maggie explains she wants one last “hoorah!” before going to live in a nursing home, but Mara senses another motive behind her crazy aunt’s behavior. When on the way to the beautiful mountain escape, Maggie reveals she has something huge to tell Mara. Soon, everything she thought she knew about her Aunt Maggie and her life is turned upside down. Thankfully, she has the beautiful landscape of Lit Moon Lake to help her cope with the truth.

Chapter 1

     Glancing around Great Aunt Maggie’s dimly lit home, dust swirled around the snow white light peeking through the windows. I could hear Momma in the back going through boxes of Maggie’s old stuff. Box after box, dust clouds began to creep their way into the living room, where I sat.

     Maggie is the type of older lady who uses the plastic couch covers, and watches black and white TV shows in the dark, while eating popcorn. She’s an old soul stuck in the ’80’s. I could never lose her in a crowd. She’s always the bigger, taller lady with the teased blonde hair, red lips, and red fingernails. If her hair looked good red, she would have dyed it too.

     I’m SO bored, I thought to myself. There were a million other things I could be doing besides collecting dust, along with all of Maggie’s other belongings. Just then, my phone buzzed. I adjusted myself on Maggie’s sticky couch and pulled my phone from my pocket to read the notification. It was a text from Johanna.

    Want to come stay the weekend?

    As one can imagine, I was elated to have received this message. I had been sitting in the same spot for hours staring at the fake wood paneling, pink carpet, and bright red curtains, for what felt like an eternity.

    “Mooooooooooommmmmm!” I yelled.

    From the back room and down the hall, walking toward me, I saw my tired mother. She had dust on her ugly Christmas sweater and cobwebs in her grey and black bob cut.

    “Whew! What a mess!” Momma said, dusting herself off. “What do you need, honey?”

    “Can I stay with Johanna this weekend?”

    Momma wiped her hands on a wash cloth nearby and replied with, “Of course. Would you like me to take you or do you want to walk?”

    “I think I’ll walk.” I nodded, acting as though I wasn’t in a hurry to get out of there, but I really was.

    “Okay. Text me when you’re there and be home by 4 on Sunday, in time for supper. Have fun!” Momma said, pointing her dusty fingers at me, smiling.

    I nodded, afraid to say anything else so she didn’t change her mind or add another condition to our agreement. Momma mentioned having to get back to work and disappeared, into the back room of the house, once more.

     Just after standing up to leave, I heard a loud thump in the bathroom. Thinking nothing of it, I took a few more steps toward the door. As soon as I was able to see through its diamond shaped windows, I louder thump came from the bathroom. Taking this noise much more seriously, my teenage heart began to pound. If momma’s in the back, who could be in the bathroom? Thoughts and guesses ran through my mind as I turned to face the bathroom behind me. Hearing smaller thumps, I hoped it was something cute, like a puppy. With each step further, the noise grew louder. I reached for the small golden handle, ready to smash a mouse or cuddle a puppy. Before I could pull the door completely open, Aunt Maggie stepped out in her pink bathrobe with a red towel on her head. Along with her came a cloud of perfume, makeup, and hairspray.

    “Well! Hello, Darling!” Aunt Maggie said, holding her hand out, with bright red painted nails out for me to kiss, as though she were royalty.

    I wasn’t amused. Being 16, nothing really gets to me. I don’t usually get excited over things or sweat the small stuff. I’m sure by the expression on my face, Aunt Maggie knew that I wasn’t in the mood. “I thought you were-”

    Before I could finish, Aunt Maggie interrupted, “SHOPPING! You thought I was shopping? On a day like this? No, child. We’re going on a trip!” Maggie let down her blond hair from the towel. It was freshly curled. How it formed perfectly from a wet towel, I’ll never know. Taking off her robe, she had on her favorite bright red jumpsuit. “Oh! One more thing, Darling. I can’t forget my bright red lipstick!”

    Maggie stepped into the bathroom and applied thick coats of her bright red lipstick in front of her ginormous. Taking a few steps back, I glanced down the hall where mom was still going through boxes. Every now and then, I would hear something fall and break. Evidently, she paid no mind to Maggie’s crazy antics. 

    Turning my attention back to Maggie, I nervously said, “I’m supposed to stay with Johanna this weekend. Where are you wanting to go?”

    “Oh, honey. That’s great. Hey. Listen. Don’t tell your momma any different okay? If she finds out I’m taking you to my special place, she may have a conniption,” She voiced to me while pursing her lips, moving her eyes from the mirror, to me, and back to the mirror.

    “What is going on?” I was confused and couldn’t understand quite what was going on at this point. “You want me to go away with you for the weekend? What about mom? What about going through some of your old stuff?”

    “Button, your momma will be just fine. She wants to put me in that nursing home and Lord knows it’s gonna happen. Can’t I just have one last fun weekend with my favorite great niece before I’m locked up in that place forever? I don’t care about my stuff. Besides, your momma will be here all weekend going through it. So….. what do you say?” Maggie’s eyes shimmered with hope and excitement.

    Skeptical of her promises, I asked, “What kind of special place?”

    “Oh, Button. I’m so glad you asked! It’s a beautiful cabin in the Range Mountains. It’s at a beautiful place called Lit Moon Lake. My family used to vacation there when I was a child.” Maggie lowered her voice and moved closer to my face. Her breath smelled like Spearmint gum. “They have all sorts of fun things you teenagers like to do.”

      I thought long and hard for a moment. The only thing I do at Johanna’s is watch movies. Nothing exciting every happens at her house. Seeing the gleam in Aunt Maggie’s eyes made me want to see what kind of fun she had in mind. “Okay,” I agree. “Just let me tell mom bye.”

    With the news of my agreement, Maggie clapped and jumped up and down saying, “Just don’t mention me, please. If she still thinks I’m out shopping, she knows I’m crazy enough to shop all weekend. She won’t even miss me.”

    Still skeptical of Maggie’s whole plan, but having an innate need for adventure, I yelled back to Mom, “BYEEE! I love you! See you Sunday!” Maggie winked at me, and I back at her.

    “GOOD BYE, SWEETIE! LOVE YOU TOO!” Mom yelled.

    When I twirled around to face the door, Maggie was already standing there, donning her bright red puffy jacket, with the fur on the hood. In her hand was the keys to her red ‘80’s model Mustang, that sat in the garage attached to the house. She jingled them enticingly and smiled. I rolled my eyes and walked past her, through the front door.

    Once we found ourselves in the driveway to Maggie’s suburban home, we pulled our jackets tighter around us to fend off the cold. Maggie tried to hide behind me, hunching over, as we walked to the garage. Her attempt to hide from all of her neighbors was obvious. God love Maggie’s heart. She was just a little bigger than I am. More tall and more round, but that’s just who she was. She is my Maggie and I am glad to have her.

    Standing before the gigantic garage door, Maggie and I began to giggle. Being mischievous was kinda fun, even with my crazy aunt.

    Pointing to the garage door, Maggie instructed, “Turn the handle one-half turn clockwise and lift up.”

    Following her instructions, the garage door began to lift and the cold light seeped in to reveal a vehicle covered with a black tarp. I pulled the heavy tarp off the car and sat it in the corner of the garage nearest to me. Maggie threw me the keys and we both jumped into the car excitedly.

    I shoved the keys into the ignition and turned them, but nothing happened. Our smiles and excitement faded from both of our faces. Maggie glanced around, taking notice of the untouched red leather interior and the glossy red hood.

    “What’s this?” I asked, pointing to the shifter that was located below the elbow rest. It wasn’t as small as the ones I was used to and it had numbers on it.

    “OHHH! HA HA HA!” Maggie burst into uncontrollable laughter. “You kids these days. I don’t know how you survive. It’s a GEAR SHIFTER!” She said, slowly so that my fragile teen mind could understand.

    “Your car is a manual?!” I yelled. “How am I supposed to drive this thing?! Why don’t you drive, Aunt Maggie?”

    “Oh, no, dear. The coordination between my feet and hands is a little off these days. There’s no time like the present to learn!” Immediately, Maggie let out the e-brake and the car began to roll back.

    “Aunt Maggie, what do I do?!” I was in a panic and the street was coming up close in the rear-view mirror.

    “The middle pedal down there is your brake. The far left is the clutch. The far right is the gas. Just ease on the brake for right now, and let me close the garage door.”

    Taking a deep breath, I eased on the brake and Maggie exited the car to manually close the garage door. All of the excitement made me forget how cold it was out. Looking through all of the knobs on the dash, I found the air and turned it to the red, hoping it meant heat. Maggie quickly hopped back into the car. From the looks of the way the was moving, one might suggest she could audition for a James Bond remake. “Okay, Button. You ready?”

    “I’m not sure.” I admitted, clueless to the whole manual thing.

    “Now, see how I can wiggle the gear shift?” Maggie asked, tossing it in her hand. “That means the car is in neutral. So if you’ll let it roll back a little further, you can back out into the street.”

    Letting off the brake, I could feel the car slowly roll back.

    “Now, start turning the wheel, so when we give it some gas, we can take off in the right direction!” Maggie said, assisting me in turning the wheel.

    “I know how to drive. I’ve been doing it for a year, you know.”

    “Well, that’s nothing compared to the fifty-some years I have under my belt, so shush your mush and get to work.”

    We both turned to look out the back window and once the tires hit the street, I turned the wheel so we would face the direction we needed to go.

    “Now, hold that brake AND the clutch at the same time and watch this!” Maggie said. After I held them down, she shoved the gear shift as far as she could toward me and then forward. “Now, you’re going to have to ease off the brake and the clutch while adding gas.”

    “What?! How do you do that?!” I was very nervous again.

    “And that, my darling, is why you teenagers don’t bother with a manual transmission. Come on, give her some gas!” Maggie threw her hands in the air, ready for a ride.

    Growing up watching Maggie drive her red Mustang gave me a basis for how to drive it myself. But, it wasn’t as easy as she made it look. I let off the brake a little and the car began to roll back. I freaked out and slammed on the brake again. “I can’t do it! I can’t do it!” I screamed.

    “Calm down, child. We are on a flat street. It’s not like you’re going to roll far. Just take your foot off the brake and ease on the gas. When you’ve eased on the gas, let off the clutch slowly. You’ll feel it start to grab.”

    “What does that mean?!” My heart was racing.

    “I’m not entirely sure, but that’s what the car salesman told me when I bought her.”

    “You learned to drive your car from the man you bought it from?!”

    “Hey, you’re learning from your crazy great aunt. So, I can’t say much for you either.”

    “Touche,” I told her, rolling my eyes. I then did exactly what she said and the car began to roll forward.

    “Whooo Hooo! Alright, Button. There’s a stop sign down here. You’re gonna have to push in the clutch and the brake at the same time, so you don’t kill it.”

    “Kill it?”

    “If the car is stopped and the clutch isn’t pushed down, the car will quit, die, bite the dust, what have you.”

    Coming up to the stop sign, I eased on the clutch and then the brake and came to a stop just beyond the stop sign.

    “Not bad! I’d say you’ll be a pro by the time we make it there! Now, when pulling out, do all of that again. You know, letting off the brake and giving it a little gas while letting off of the clutch.”

    As soon as I followed her strict orders, the car stalled. “Oh, no. What did I do?” I asked.

    “This is normal. I didn’t expect you to take off right in the beginning. You aren’t completely like me, you know.” Maggie nodded her head and advised me to push in the clutch and brake again and to restart the car. The engine roared as though it hadn’t been fired in quite some time and was happy to be set free. “Now, ease off the clutch and brake and give her some gas.”

    Again, I followed Maggie’s instructions but didn’t give it enough gas before the clutch was all the way out. So, as one can guess, the car jerked forward a few times and stalled again. Frustrated, I laid my head on the steering wheel and took a deep breath. “Let’s just go home.” I said. But then, a felt a buzzing in my pocket. It was Mom.

    Looking to Maggie, she mouthed the words, “Don’t tell her I’m here.”

    “Hello.” I said, nervously.

    “Oh. Hi, honey. I was calling to see if you made it to Johanna’s house.”

    Maggie shook her head up and down. I continued, “Uh, ummm, yeah. Yeah, Mom. I’m here.”

    “Oh, good. I was beginning to get worried. I’ve just been making some calls to Aunt Maggie’s doctors. I wanted to update them since they told her to go on bed rest a month ago. Of course, she never listened to them, but I wanted to let them know she will no longer be here.”

    Maggie overheard Mom and mouthed silently to me, “Hence, the nursing home,” and sighed. She threw her arms in the air demonstrating disappointment.

    “Oh, right. Okay. Um, love you, Mom.”

    “I won’t keep you. I know you girls will have fun gossiping and doing your nails, or whatever you girls do. If you need me, call me. Love you, baby.”

    “Love you, Mom,” I said, ending the call.

    “Whew!” Aunt Maggie sighed. “Now that was a close one!”

    “You’re telling me! Now, how do I start this thing again?”

    “Now, that’s the spirit! Ease off the clutch and give her enough gas to begin to roll.”

    The car began to roll forward, causing Maggie to get excited. “That’s it, baby! Now, let that clutch fly!”

    Removing my foot from the clutch and pressing harder on the gas, the car began to roar and speed up.

    “Now you get to learn the art of changing gears. Which, if you’ll just hold down the clutch, I’ll do it for you.”

    “Please! I think I’ve had enough of this car for one day.” I said, cruising down 4th street at a slow but steady rate.

    “Okay. When you hear the car get loud and that red hand over there gets near 3, push in the clutch while the car is rolling and I’ll put her in second gear. Be sure to let off the gas while pushing in the clutch.”

    As soon as I let off the gas and pushed in the clutch, Maggie forced the gear shift into second gear and the car made a loud grinding sound. “I want to SCREAM, MAGGIE!” I yelled. The car slowed down and I applied the gas once more, so it wouldn’t stall again.

    “Trust me, Button. This is gonna be the hardest part of your weekend. If you can do this, you can do anything. Besides, you teenagers give up too easily.”

    Frustrated, I growled under my breath and mashed down the clutch as hard as I could. “Don’t forget to let off the gas completely!” Maggie yelled.

    Sure enough, the car glided into second gear. Then Maggie yelled, “Now, floor it!”

    “We’re cruising now, Aunt Maggie!” I said, giggling and excited. However, my few moments of excitement turned into worry when I saw the gas gauge indicating low fuel.

    I looked over to Maggie, who was smiling while watching all of the houses go by. “Maggie?” I said under my breath, trying not to disturb her from the winter wonderland she had escaped to.

    “Oh. Sorry. I was just daydreaming,” Maggie said glancing out the window and back to me. “What do you need, Dear?”

    “Umm… We are almost out of gas.”

Chapter 2

     Maggie and I were lucky that it was later in the evening when we made our escape. In my town, because it gets dark early, no one ventures out past four p.m. You could say that I live in a community of older folks who moved up this way to retire. I say that because most of Aunt Maggie’s neighbors are retired. A few blocks down, the same can be said for my neck of the woods.

    “Stop right here,” Maggie said, motioning to Steve’s Stop and Go Mart. “They’re the only ones around here that do not put water in their gas.”

    I had no clue what Maggie was talking about, but I held the clutch in as she shifted the car down, until we came to a rolling stop beside the gas pump. Aunt Maggie put the car in neutral and pulled the e-brake back. “Now shut the car off,” she instructed.

    I turned the key and unbuckled. My new-found freedom left me when I realized that I was only 16 and had no way to pay for the gas we needed.

    Realizing my dilemma, Maggie shouted, “Oh! Right! You’ll have to use my credit card. I’m all out of cash.” She searched through the house she carried inside her purse and produced none other than a bright red leather wallet. Searching through all of her cards like files in a filing cabinet, she pulled her final selection. “This one ought to do it. Fill her up to the top.”

    I nodded nervously. Fortunately, I knew how to pump gas, even though I had only done it once or twice before. Stepping out into the cold, the air hit me like a brick wall. My breath produced white clouds that faded away a few seconds after they were produced. If no one knew any better, it could have looked as though I was a heavy smoker. Stepping up to the pump on the passenger’s side of the bright red car, I slid Maggie’s card in the slot. To my surprise, a huge “DENIED” showed up on the screen.

    “Turn it around, silly! It can’t read the strip if it’s turned the wrong way!” Maggie giggled, shaking her head.

    Taking a deep breath, I swiped the card again, the right way. After a few moments of the word “PROCESSING…” blinking, it told me to “BEGIN FUELING”. I unscrewed the gas cap and placed the nozzle inside, choosing premium fuel, according to Aunt Maggie’s specific request.

    While fueling, Maggie rolled down her window again and stuck her head out this time. “You can go get us something to drink and snacks for the road, if you are up for it?”

    “Is it legal for me to use your card?” I’m only 16 and do NOT want to go to jail.

    “Mara, honey. You have my permission to use it. If you didn’t then you would be in trouble.” Maggie motioned her arm outward, out the window, to express her obvious knowledge on the subject.

    Nodding my head side to side, I figured it would be nice to have some chips and soda for the road. “Anything you want in particular?” I asked her.

    “Diet Coke and a Pay Day for me, please.”

    As I put on the gas cap, I reflected on the fact that I never understood Maggie’s need for diet anything. She always ate what she wanted. From pizza and burgers, to tacos and enchiladas, Great Aunt Maggie always paired her food with a Diet Coke. Deciding it was none of my concern how she ate or drank, unless it affected me, I trudged into the store.

    Behind the counter was a scrawny old man wearing a cap with the name of a construction company on it. His red and black plaid shirt gave him the appearance of a lumberjack. He gave me a blank stare while I searched the shelves for our favorite goodies. I thought by now he would ask if I needed anything, but Momma once told me that he fought off a couple of robbers by hand. So, he could just be paranoid.

    I laid my items on the counter. A few bottles of soda, a few bags of chips, and a few candy bars cluttered his otherwise pristine counter. “Will this be all?” he asked.

    “That’s it.” I said, getting nervous by his suspicion of me.

    “Your total is eleven dollars and seventy-two cents.”

    I pulled Maggie’s card out of my pocket and handed it to him. From front to back, he examined it closely. “Are you Maggie Rae?” he asked.

    “Um.. No. That’s my Great Aunt. She’s in the car. She sent me in to get a few things.” My hands started to sweat from nervousness.

    He darted his eyes out the windows, trying to see if I was being honest. “I don’t see anyone in that car, Sugar. I’m sorry. I can’t use it without permission from your aunt.”

    Just then, my phone began to ring. It was Aunt Maggie!

    “Hello? Where are you?” I asked, shaking.

    “Hey, Button, I’m sorry. I just had to run to the bathroom right quick. Let me talk to that dingle berry of a cashier.”

    Confused, I handed the phone to the cashier, who seemed just as confused as I was. But with a few eye rolls and glances at the card, he handed it back to me. I hung up with Maggie and he finished the transaction. “I’m sorry for any inconvenience, young lady,” he said, staring at me for a few seconds, awkwardly. “You have a great night and stay warm,” he said, while handing me the receipt.

    Delighted that the transaction went through and in a hurry to leave, I quickly blurted, “You too,” and ran out the door with the merchandise.

    “Whoo hooo! You did it, Button! I was losing hope there for a minute!” Maggie wailed from the passenger seat of the car.

    I plopped myself back into the driver’s seat and gave Maggie a stern stare.

    “We don’t have time for that, Button,” She said. “Let’s get on the road before we really get caught!”

    After opening my soda and my favorite chips, Maggie worked the gear shift and we rolled on down the road.

    Once we hit the highway, Maggie said I wouldn’t have to change gears for a while, so we cruised in fifth and munched on our snacks.

    “So, where are we going?” I asked, feeling pieces of chips sprinkle the breast of my shirt.

    “Lit Moon Lake, the most beautiful place on earth,” Maggie said, with her mouth full.

Range Valley, where I live, is a beautiful mountain town that is just outside of the Range Mountains. The Range Mountains have been compared to The Great Smoky Mountains, but on a smaller scale. Yet, it still has dinner theaters, skiing and snowboarding, fine dining, shopping, a night life, countless family friendly activities, and best of all, Lit Moon Lake. I always wanted to visit there one day. 

     My town, the town of Range Valley has coffee shops, a shopping mall, a movie theater, and a few restaurants. For most of my life, this town has been quiet, except for tourists coming through to visit Lit Moon Lake.

    “Why on earth are we going there?”

    “Well, for one, it’s close. For two, it’s special to me and while I’m in the nursing home I won’t be able to visit there. So, for my last “hoorah!”, before being locked away, I wanted to see my favorite place on earth.”

    I didn’t really know how to respond to that. Suddenly, I felt a great remorse for Aunt Maggie. It must be tough giving up all of your belongings and moving to a facility you can’t leave. Not knowing what to say, I just kept driving, following the road by the beams of the headlights.

    “I’m gonna be okay, Button. You know that. Right?” Maggie laid her hand on mine, which was rested on the unfamiliar gear shift.

    “I’m gonna miss you,” I said, trying not to avoid the negative mood.

    “Oh, honey bunny. I’m going to be just a few miles away. Your momma says I’ll be better off there, but I guess we will see.”

    “Why can’t you just stay with us?”

    “Mara, pretty soon I’m going to be a big burden. That’s something I will never be to you and your momma.” Her eyes were serious.

    “You would never be a burden. You have helped us through the years, through mom’s divorce from Carl and the death of Grandma Rose. It wouldn’t hurt for us to be there for you.” I felt a tear stream down my cheek at the thought of losing one of my closest family members. Aunt Maggie isn’t just a great aunt. She’s the sister I never had, the best friend I never had, and the best grandmother figure I’ve ever had.  

    “Whether you want me to or not, I’m not. That’s all there is to it. If you want to come see me while I’m in the hell hole, you’re more than welcome. If not, I understand why a teenager like you wouldn’t want to be in a place like that.”

    “What do you mean? Of course I will come visit you!” My excitement from the surprise of her response jolted me enough to raise my hand from the steering wheel, causing the car to veer into the left lane. Quickly, Maggie grabbed the wheel and guided the car back into the right side lane.

    “Calm your horses, Button. If you get too excited, I may as well make a spot in the nursing home for you too!” Maggie laughed.

    “At least we will have this weekend together. I’m glad that I can spend it with you.” I said, hoping this weekend would never end.

    “Me too. Me too.”

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    A few more miles down the road and after Maggie and I played a few rounds of terrible karaoke, singing along to the radio, the highest peak of the Range Mountains, Mount Point, came into view.

    “There it is. That’s where we’re going,” Maggie said, pointing her long red nails in the direction of the mountain.

    “Isn’t it covered in snow? Your car will never make it up there.”

    “They keep the roads scraped, silly. But first, we have to stop for a burger. I’m starving. Take the next exit.”

    Following her orders, I took the next exit off of the busy highway. The car slowed and I made a right, following the signs to the nearest burger joint.

    “Is this good enough?” I asked, considering the broken down condition of the facility.

    “This will do. I’m starving. Aren’t you starving?!” Aunt Maggie said, rubbing her stomach.

    “Not really, but I’ll eat.” I shrugged.

    “Oh, that’s right. I forgot. You teenagers don’t eat, or the girls don’t anyway.” Maggie rolled her eyes while I pulled up to the speaker in the drive through to order. She carefully examined the menu and then asked, “What do you want?”

    “I don’t know. It doesn’t matter.” My patience was growing thin. I had hoped we would be to the cabin by now.

    “Okay. Order 5 cheeseburgers with ketchup only, two orders of fries, and two medium Diet Cokes.”

    “Got it,” I told her, even though I knew she ordered for me too. Aunt Maggie was always the type to get her way, most of all, with people. She wasn’t pushy, she just had a way with words.

    I ordered our food and pulled up to the window to pay. The cashier gave me a fishy look when I took the card from Aunt Maggie and gave it to him. But, he didn’t seem to care too much. At least not like the last cashier. All he said was, “I don’t know where you’re going to put all of this food, little girl.” Then he quickly handed me our food and we were once again on our way.

I wasn’t sure if he meant where I would put all of the food in the car, since it was so fancy, or if he thought I was going to eat all of it.

    I had never tried to eat and drive at the same time, so I opted for fries and a drink. With a full belly and the time being much later in the night, my nerves started to set in. “Mom is not going to be happy about this, if she finds out, Maggie,” I said, one hand on the wheel and the other full of fries.

    “What your mom doesn’t know won’t hurt her, Button. Besides, I get to spend some time with my favorite great niece!”

    The night had grown so dark that Maggie’s face was only illuminated by the lights on the dash and the headlights. I knew I was out too late and NOT where I told my mom I would be. I wanted more answers from Maggie. I took a deep breath and went for it. “Cut the crap. You could have taken any of your old buddies. Why me?! What’s so special about me!”

    Maggie nearly choked on her food, when she internalized my outburst. “I thought you would enjoy this time with me.”

    “Maggie, I’m clearly temporarily running away to be with my crazy great aunt who is running from the nursing home!”

    “First of all, pre-Madonna, I am NOT running away from the nursing home. I am simply taking a detour, BUT I WILL make it there. Second of all, you will be back home on Sunday by the time your mother told you to be. I don’t know why you’re freaking out. All is well. Be happy and lets have fun!” Maggie rolled her window down enough to smoke and lit a cigarette. The excitement of the discussion and her full stomach set her cravings in full swing.

    I couldn’t help but roll my eyes. I am NO pre-Madonna, but I guess I should lighten up a bit. Running away with my aunt is much better than running away alone.

    “Besides, we need to talk,” Maggie said, breathing out enough smoke for a freight train.

    My heart sank. I knew it. She was bringing me all the way out here to lay something on me. Something big. “Why couldn’t you just tell me at home?”

    “It’s not that simple, Button. Your mom will be the most affected by this. I figured I would lay it on you, and if I survived long enough, I’d lay it on her, eventually. And I really did want to get away before being locked away. I wonder if they’ll let me smoke, have my nail polish, and red lipstick.”

    “Oh, no. You are NOT changing the subject on me now, Maggie. Tell me. What’s all this about?!” I struggled to keep the Mustang in the road.

    Maggie shook her head. Her arm was resting on the window. She took a draw from her cigarette and placed her hand back next to the opening in the window. Blowing the smoke from her lungs, I could see she was about to cave. “I will explain everything when we are there. Don’t get too caught up in the secret, Button. This is also our last outing together. Please, just enjoy it with me. I promise, I will tell you everything.”

    I caved. I didn’t want to argue with my favorite person in the world. I did want to have fun this weekend. I was already breaking the rules. I mine as well have fun doing it. Plus, if I was in a terrible mood, Aunt Maggie may not tell me what she brought me out all this way to tell me. My strategy, from here on out, is to stay calm, listen, and have fun. If anything bad comes my way, I will handle it when it gets here.

    “Okay,” I told her, nodding in agreement.

    “That’s my sweet snooker puss!” she said, tugging at my cheek. “Now, take the next exit. We are almost there!”

    Following her directions once more, I took the next exit. When I came to the stop sign, I noticed by the light of the moon that we were sitting at the foot of a large mountain.

    “Take a left right here and then the next right. It’s gonna be a steep climb, so we gotta keep ole’ girl here in a low gear, so she doesn’t give out on us.”

    “Got it,” I said, even though I had no clue what she was talking about. My mind was distracted by the sheer beauty of the sky and the reflection of the moon on the frozen snow. We passed under the bridge and made a right.

    “This road takes us almost straight up the mountain. It’s the quickest way to the cabin,” Maggie said, her voice beaming with more and more excitement the closer we got to our destination. 

    I kept my eyes on the moonlit road, but I also tossed them around to soak in the scenery. Thick woods covered both sides of the paved mountainous pathway. About a mile away and a few hundred feet higher, I could see the glow from what looked like a small town.

    “That’s Lit Moon Lake. That’s where we’re going.” There was an unprecedented amount of satisfaction in Maggie’s voice.

    “It’s… beautiful,” I said, still trying to focus on the road and take in the beauty before me. As we got closer, I could see the lake surrounded by cabins along its beach. Then, behind the cabins, was the Range Mountains. A bright green aurora gleamed in the sky above the lake. Lights around the lake illuminated the circumference of the body of water and its beaches.

    “This is it! We’re here!” Aunt Maggie shouted. “Stop at this first cabin. It’s the office where you need to check in.

    I pulled in front of the cabin and pulled the e-brake while Maggie put the car in neutral. “Can’t we just leave it in first and let it die right here?” I asked.

    “If you wouldn’t do that to me, you aren’t doing it to my precious car!” Maggie said. “I don’t want my transmission ruined.”

    Lost in Maggie’s car-talk again, I just dropped it, huffing. “So, what now?”

    “Walk in and ask for cabin number 12. Pay with my credit card.” She handed me the card and her license.

    “What’s the license for?”

    “They need a license on file if you rent anything on the property, so they can be sure they get their property back. I thought you may want to go horseback riding, rent a golf cart, or paddle boat.”

    I gave Maggie a smart look. There was no way I was riding horses on a snowy mountain or paddle boating on a frozen lake. For the sake of arguing, I took the cards and exited the vehicle.

    Stepping up the three steps into the office, I could feel the warmth radiating from the cabin. Once inside, I was consumed with the suffocating heat from the wood stove. Behind the counter, I spotted an older gentleman in coveralls. The wall behind him was filled with keys, to the cabins I guessed.

    “How can I help you, ma’am?”

    “I’m here to stay in cabin number 12, please.”

    “Oh. You’re Maggie’s niece. She told me you would be coming. I’m glad to see you’ve made it safety. She said you would have her license and credit card for payment.”

    “Yes. Here they are.”

    He gently took them from my hand and placed them on the wooden counter. The fingers of his gloves were missing, exposing his fleshly digits as they punched the keys on the keyboard one at a time. “Here you go. There’s a road that runs behind all the cabins. Follow it until you reach number 12. Enjoy your stay.”

    Grabbing the cards and shoving them in my pocket, I ran back out the Mustang. What I found was nothing short of hilarious. Maggie must not have seen me watching her, because she was dancing so much she shook the whole car. And the music was so loud, I was afraid she would wake the customers in the nearby cabins.

    I quickly swung the car door open and plopped myself in the driver’s seat to turn down the music.

    “What?! I was having fun!”

    I smiled, amused at her joy. I then dangled the #12 cabin keys in front of her face. “You ready?” I asked. 

    “Ready as I’ll ever be,” she said with a deep breath. “Let’s go.”

Chapter 3

     I pulled around the front office and followed the fork in the road to the right. This path took me behind all the cabins around the lake.

    “There it is!” Maggie cried. “There’s my number 12!” It seemed as though she was jumping up and down in her seat.

    I pulled right beside the cabin and shut off the car. “Now I know why they call it Lit Moon Lake,” I said, admiring the beautiful glow of my surroundings. It was like the lake had its own spotlight, the moon. All of the cabins were situated in a circle on the edges of the lake, facing inward. The mountains around the lake created a crater appearance, leaving this beautiful oasis isolated and seemingly desolate.

    “That’s not the only reason they call it Lit Moon Lake. Back in my day, EVERYONE was lit at Lit Moon Lake. Ha!” Maggie laughed uncontrollably at her alcohol pun.

    “I bet you had a lot of great times here. It seems like a warm and inviting place.”

    “You bet, Button. I met my first love here. Right on this very beach. It was the summer of 1969. I’ll never forget….” Maggie seemed to stare off into the distance and become consumed by the memories of her past.

    “Maggie?” I said, nudging her with my elbow.

    “Oh! Yes, Button. Sorry. We have a lot to talk about. A LOT! But right now, we need to get into the cabin and warm ourselves by the fresh fire Mr. Dave built.” Maggie opened her door. Before exiting the car, she put her purse from the back seat onto her shoulder saying, “Toss me those keys and lets head inside.” 

Again, thank you for reading! I hope to have this book published by the end of January. I can’t wait to see what you think!

 

 

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“Toss me those keys and let’s head inside”.

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My Favorite Scripture

As you all know, I am a stay-at-home mom, author, and full time student. Overwhelmed doesn’t even begin to describe my experience, but somehow I make it work. God gave me a scripture a long time ago, and ever since, when I get overwhelmed I just think of it. When I think of it, I am reminded that he had this planned for me long before I began my educational journey, 5 years ago. I never in my wildest dreams imagined I would have the chance to obtain a master’s degree. For that, I am extremely humbled and grateful. Even on the days when I feel that my plate is overloaded, I am reminded that I am a part of His plan and He is preparing me for the work he will have me to do. He has already determined my path and he will always make my way.

The scripture he gave me when I began this journey was: 2 Samuel 22:34 , which states, “He maketh my feet like Hinds’ feet: and setteth me on my high places”.

This scripture tells me two things. First, it says he will give me what I need to get me to where he wants me to go. Secondly, he will set me on my high places. That means my journey is a personal one, between God and I. I am not meant to go where other people go. He has a plan specifically for me and he will give me the abilities to carry out that plan, according to his word.

I hope this helps someone today. It helps me to think of this scripture often, when I feel as though I’ll never “get there” or if I feel overwhelmed. He’s gotten me this far, through an associate’s program, bachelor’s degree, and now he’s there for me while I’m going through a master’s curriculum. I never thought I would ever make it this far, but I’m so glad that I serve a God who sends me to the places I didn’t think I could ever reach. It’s all because of his gift of hinds’ feet.

Thank you for reading,

Marlena Owens

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I LOVE Philly Swirl Italian Ice! Here’s why…..

As you all know, I’m an author. And when I find a product that touches my soul, I have to let the whole world know!

As a child, my mother and I would curl up together under the covers, watch our favorite movies, and eat our favorite snacks. Most of the time, it was popcorn or ice cream. I looked forward to this quality time with her, but I never imagined the satisfaction a parent could gather from an action so simple, until I had children of my own.

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I stumbled upon Philly Swirl products about a year or so ago. My children noticed the brightly colored package and yummy flavors of the smooth Italian ice. Curiously, I placed a box into my shopping cart, without thinking about how much I would come to love this product. Not only because it tasted so good, but because it would become a special part of our traditional movie-time snuggles.

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Philly Swirl offers push pops, swirl cups, and popsicles, all made with the wonderfully tasting Italian ice that bursts with smooth fruity flavors. The swirl cups conveniently come with sucker spoons, which add to the delicious flavor. Another great part, for me, is the low calories! My favorite flavors are the sunburst swirl cups and the banana split popsicles. They are all SO good! My husband loves the cotton candy flavors. My girls love the hurricane and rainbow flavors, although all of the flavors are delectable! Now, when we visit the grocery store, we buy at least two or three boxes of each. My girls don’t want any other kind of frozen treat. They’re that good!

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I can’t thank Philly Swirl enough for helping to enhance our family time. Most evenings, my girls and I curl up under a blanket with our Philly Swirl products, and watch our favorite movies, just as I did with my mom when I was little. I wouldn’t trade this time with them for the world, because we all know it goes by way too fast. We also share the joy of sparing no expense to make our children’s childhood as memorable as possible, although Philly Swirl products are extremely affordable. You get exactly what you pay for and so much more!

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Thank you Philly Swirl! The memories we’ve made with your products will last far beyond the wrinkling of my skin or the graying of my hair. For even then, when I think of Philly Swirl Italian Ice and that special time with my girls, once again, my heart will swell with warmth and a smile will grace my aged face because of the wonderful memories we created.

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Philly Swirl has forever made an imprint on my family’s traditions. I am honored to have such a child-oriented and family-oriented company be a part of them! Their “Swirl Up Your Imagination” campaign fits perfectly with what I consider one of the most important aspects of childhood. It was because of my great childhood, and the ability to use my imagination, that I have the ability write page-turning novels! I’m so glad I can provide the same experience for my children!

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If you haven’t tried Philly Swirl products, I highly recommend you give them a try! You will not be disappointed. My husband and I both love their products just as much as our girls do! Check out their other great products at: www.phillyswirl.com

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What’s another great part of Philly Swirl products? They go great with reading an intriguing novel! Check out my books, Escorting Mr. Colburn and Nora From the Hollow, at: www.amazon.com/author/marlenaowens

Book covers and descriptions below!

 

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In the fall of 1895, in the small town of Hollow Springs, there have been a string of murders. Most of these killings have happened during a fog, causing the townspeople to create superstitions around this naturally occurring event. This time it was Nora Lusk’s husband, Lucius. Lucius wasn’t perfect. He was actually far from perfect. This leads Nora to make a list of three people who were capable of killing her husband. Lucius was known for putting counterfeit money into the church’s offering plate. Therefore, the angry Preacher Cliff is the first suspect. The second, Alice Mabe, was Lucius’ lover. She seemed like the type who would kill someone for the simple reason that if she couldn’t have them, no one could. Lastly, Silas Blanche, saw the way Lucius treated Nora and looked forward to the day he could treat Nora better. Yet, he couldn’t do it with Lucius in the way. Ironically, when the town points their fingers at Nora, she and her beloved friends must work quickly to investigate the twists and tangles of the deep family rivalries, and the small town secrets of Hollow Springs, to clear her name! Just when you think you know what happened and why, another curve ball is thrown into the mix!

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With the sudden death of her parents, Justine is forced to give up college and take care of her younger brother, Sam. Her world comes crashing down even further with the news that Sam’s private school tuition is due. Frantic, Justine seeks the help of her energetic neighbor, Wanda, who volunteers to look after Sam, so Justine can find the money he needs. Since she lives in New York City, she sees an opportunity to become a personal travel agent. In doing this, she will escort visitors to the city, to any destination they would like. Hopeful of her new job title, Justine places an ad in the online trading post, seeking clients. She only gets one reply, but little does she know, that’s the only reply she will need! Join Justine and Craig as they explore the top 3 destinations in New York City (The Statue of Liberty, Central Park, and The Empire State Building), learn about love and loss, and experience risks that pay off!

As always, thank you all for reading! Feel free to follow Philly Swirl and myself on social media!

Facebook: @MarlenaOwensAuthor

Twitter: @m_owens_author

Email: m.owens.author@gmail.com

Best Wishes,

Marlena Owens

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Info on Nora From The Hollow, My New Book

     I am SO excited to show you all the cover of Nora From The Hollow!! This book will be available Saturday, September 22nd, the first day of fall!

If you’re like me, and love fall, this book will satisfy all of your fall time cravings. There’s murder, mystery, spooky scenes, and twists and turns you’ll never expect! Heck, I didn’t even expect half of them!😂 As always, my books are comprised of elements that all ages can enjoy. So, get ready to snuggle up by the fire, sip on some hot chocolate, and follow Nora’s story as she finds out who murdered her husband, Lucius.

Here’s the brief book description:

In the fall of 1895, in the small town of Hollow Springs, there have been a string of murders. Most of these killings have happened during a fog, causing the townspeople to create superstitions around this naturally occurring event. This time, it was Nora Lusk’s husband, Lucius. Lucius wasn’t perfect. He was actually far from perfect. This leads Nora to make a list of three people who were capable of killing her husband. Lucius was known for putting counterfeit money into the church’s offering plate. Therefore, the angry Preacher Cliff is the first suspect. The second, Alice Mabe, was Lucius’ lover. She seemed like the type who would kill someone for the simple reason that if she couldn’t have them, no one could. Lastly, Silas Blanche, saw the way Lucius treated Nora and looked forward to the day when he could treat Nora better. Yet, he couldn’t do it with Lucius in the way. Ironically, when the town points their fingers at Nora, she and her beloved friends must work quickly to investigate the twists and tangles of the deep family rivalries, and the small town secrets of Hollow Springs, to clear her name! Just when you think you know what happened and why, another curve ball is thrown into the mix!

Some great characters you’ll love:

Nora Lusk: She’s the anti-social crazy lady with a short fuse that the town fears. Yet, she has a soft side for her friends.

Dirk Ward: He’s one of the sheriff’s deputies who finds himself tasked with solving the murder of Lucius Lusk, Nora’s husband.

Amy and Amelia Ward: Sisters to Dirk and best friends/neighbors of Nora, serve as accomplices in the complicated investigation.

One interesting thing to note, my great grandmother’s maiden name was Nora Lusk. When searching for creepy dark names for my characters, I knew I had to use her name as the main character! Although I never got to meet her, I’m sure she would be thrilled!

 

Thank you all for reading,
Marlena Owens

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Nora From the Hollow is Published!

Hey, Y’all!

Nora From the Hollow is now available at Amazon.com/author/marlenaowens

Synopsis:

In the fall of 1895, in the small town of Hollow Springs, there have been a string of murders. Most of these killings have happened during a fog, causing the townspeople to create superstitions around this naturally occurring event. This time, it was Nora Lusk’s husband, Lucius. Lucius wasn’t perfect. He was actually far from perfect. This leads Nora to make a list of three people who were capable of killing her husband. Lucius was known for putting counterfeit money into the church’s offering plate. Therefore, the angry Preacher Cliff is the first suspect. The second, Alice Mabe, was Lucius’ lover. She seemed like the type who would kill someone for the simple reason that if she couldn’t have them, no one could. Lastly, Silas Blanche, saw the way Lucius treated Nora and looked forward to the day when he could treat Nora better. Yet, he couldn’t do it with Lucius in the way. Ironically, when the town points their fingers at Nora, she and her beloved friends must work quickly to investigate the twists and tangles of the deep family rivalries, and the small town secrets of Hollow Springs, to clear her name! Just when you think you know what happened and why, another curve ball is thrown into the mix!

 

Please be sure to let me know what you think and leave a review! Thank you all for your wonderful support!

Best Wishes,

Marlena Owens

 

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Author Marlena Owens Partners With PhillySwirl

*photo courtesy of PhillySwirl*

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Hey, everyone! I hope you all are doing well! I have some great news that will help me and the company I am partnering with!

I am very excited to announce that I have partnered with a product that I absolutely love and believe in! PhillySwirl cups are delicious, super smooth Italian Ice that comes with a flavored spoon!

I contacted this company about a week ago professing my love for their delicious treat, to which they replied:

So, as soon as I receive the premium items, my family and I will take pictures of us enjoying our favorite frozen treat (which is not hard at all to do) and I will write a beautiful blog post explaining why I love this product, and why you should too! The theme of the post and photos will go along with PhillySwirl’s campaign, “Swirl Up Your Imagination,” which I think is wonderful for their target audience, children.

If you haven’t tried any of PhillySwirl’s products, I highly recommend you do so! I fell in love with this product over a year ago and still buy it every time I go to the grocery store. It’s a sweet treat that my babies and I can enjoy together! There is no high fructose corn syrup, it requires no spoons (because they’re included #momwin), and they’re only 100 calories per cup.

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I am very excited for this experience, as the blog post and photos will be shared on all of PhillySwirl’s social media and websites, as well as mine!

I’ll keep you all updated. In the mean time, treat yourself and your kids to PhillySwirl products! Let your tastebuds, and the smiles on your babies’ faces, speak for themselves!

PhillySwirl is such a generous and kind company, who has provided me with an opportunity that is not easy to come by. Therefore, I would like to shout a huge “THANK YOU!!” to this awesome company and to those who have read my books, encouraged, and supported me throughout the many projects I have taken on in my life.

As always, thank you for reading!

Much love,

Marlena Owens

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Preview My Second Book: Nora From the Hollow!

I wanted to take a quick moment to say thank you to everyone for the support! I am very excited to release the first two chapters, and some of chapter three, of Nora From the Hollow! As always, be sure to let me know what you think! The complete book will be published in September. “Like” my Facebook page @MarlenaOwensAuthor and follow me on twitter @m_owens_author for updates and giveaways! 

                                                 Chapter 1: Sheriff Warren
    “How well do you know Mrs. Nora Lusk?” Sheriff Warren asked Deputy Ward.
    “She’s best friends with my sisters and she’s our neighbor. She lives right beside the old home place that my sisters occupy. I live in the cottage just outside the home, but still on the family property.” Deputy Ward leaned forward in his chair saying, “We’ve crossed paths a time or two. Why do you care?”
    “Well,” said Sheriff Warren, leaning back in his chair, “you’re the deputy. Why don’t you tell me?”
    Deputy Dirk Ward looked around the sheriff’s office. It was stick built, dusty, and had only one jail cell in it. There were three chairs, behind three desks, for the 3 lawmen in the town. The first, Sheriff Neil Warren, had served the longest. He knew the most about the town and how to catch a criminal. The second, Dirk Ward, the youngest of three siblings, who just moved back from Buxton, recently joined and was learning the ropes. Lastly, there’s Jessup Ash, the other deputy. He’s a trigger happy know-it-all who’s full of himself. Luckily, he had the day off so Dirk didn’t have to listen to him talk about himself all day.
    Thinking back on Sheriff Warren’s question, Dirk knew he was being tested. “Well,” he began, “her husband just died three days ago and we don’t have any suspects. All we know is, he was shot to death behind his blacksmith shop, here in town. We don’t have any witnesses.”
    “You missed one thing,” Sheriff Warren said, putting his pointer finger in Dirk’s face.
    “What’s that?” Deputy Ward asked, looking Sheriff Warren in the eyes, trying to size him up.
    Sheriff Warren’s slicked back black hair, curled up mustache, burning cigar, and death stare gave him a rough and tough appearance. Looking at Sheriff Warren, Dirk knew he didn’t put up with any nonsense.
    “Lucius Lusk, Nora’s husband, was unfaithful.” Sheriff Warren’s eyebrows raised as though he had found the fountain of youth or they key to happiness.
    “With whom,” Dirk inquired.
    “Alice Mabe. It was confirmed by Alice herself the day after he was found, although the whole town knew what was going on.”
    Puzzled, Dirk began to think. He then said, “Did Nora know about this?”
    Sheriff Warren’s eyes widened as he took the cigar out of his mouth and let out a puff of smoke, saying, “Why don’t you find out, boy.”
    This was the first murder case that Dirk had been assigned to. To be honest, he was nervous. He was nervous because it was his first major case, and because he was investigating his sisters’ best friend. The only other cases he had been tasked with was to find the owner of the stray dog that had been hanging around the sheriff’s office. Unfortunately, he was unsuccessful. So, Buddy, the Golden Retriever, was now property of the Sheriff’s office. He was of no use to them except keeping the bed in the empty cell warm for a prisoner who would likely never fill it.
    Getting up from his chair, Dirk donned his gun, hat, and badge. He took a hint from Sheriff Warren and excused himself from the intensity of the room. Walking outside the sheriff’s office, Dirk could see the saloon straight across the dirt road. A few buildings down to the right was the mercantile and the school house, where Alice taught the children of Hollow Springs. A few buildings down to the left were the blacksmith shop, the sawmill, and the Inn. The saloon and mercantile were owned by Alice Mabe’s father. The sawmill and Inn were owned by the Jensen’s. Glancing back toward his horse, Bucky, Dirk hopped on and headed down the only road in and out of town, to Nora’s house.
    Passing several townspeople on his way out, and trying to act respectfully, Dirk nodded his head and kept his hat in line just above his eyes. Sheriff Warren said that’s the way the law should wear a hat. It gave them a bit of an edge. Creeping along the path, Dirk could see his breath in the cold fall air. He could see Bucky’s too. It looked as if the pitch black horse ran on steam, and his nostrils were the valves that the steam was released from.
    A few moments later, Dirk was outside of town. He continued on the desolate, and not very well maintained, gravel path. Passing him on either side was fields of corn with scare crows in them. Dirk felt small because he could barely see over the tall rows. Before he knew it, a crow had landed on the fence to his right, letting out a big “squaaaaakk”! This loud screech sent Bucky into a fit. Before he knew it, Dirk was on the ground and Bucky was nowhere to be found.
    “Bucky!” Dirk cried, clicking his tongue to bring his dear friend back. However, after calling for a few moments, he decided to continue on. He knew the sheriff would be furious if he couldn’t complete this one simple task, which was proving to be more of a pain than he had anticipated.
    Since he was almost to his family’s farm, where his sisters Amy and Amelia lived, he decided to go there to dry off and warm up. From the road, Dirk could see the house where his sisters lived and the cottage where he lived. There were cornrows on both sides leading up to the old family home place. Dirk’s parents moved away when they inherited Dirk’s grandfather’s farm in Buxton, a nearby town. So, their parents left their 100 acre farm to their three children to care for.
    Making his way up to the home, Dirk saw Amelia come out of the house first.
    “What have you gotten yourself into now, brother?” Amelia asked, intently.
    “About a mile back, Bucky got spooked and bucked me off.”
    “Well, daddy didn’t call him Bucky for nothing,” she said with a chuckle. “Let’s get you inside. Amy’s made some homemade vegetable soup.”
    Walking up the steps into their tiny home, Dirk could feel the lightness of the crisp air and the crunch of leaves under his feet. Peering into the house brought a wave of warmth and fond childhood memories.
    “What are you doing here?” Amy asked.
    “Just horsing around,” Dirk laughed, glancing back at Amelia who had already taken his jacket, his hat, and his boots, and set him a place at the table.
    “Do you want soup or not?” Amy interrogated.
    “Of course.” he returned.
    “Then you better tell me what you’re doing all the way out here during the time you’re supposed to be working for the sheriff.” Amy stirred the pot and scooped some out into a bowl. She wouldn’t put anymore into it until he gave her some answers. On the second scoop, she held it over the bowl while staring him down until he began to speak.
    “It’s Nora,” he said, giving into her demeanor.
    “I knew it! I swear, Dirk. If you…” Amy was furious. She was so furious, she almost spilled the soup. “She just lost her husband!”
    “Calm down. It’s just for questioning,” he assured her.
    She sat the bowl of soup in front of him with a glass of water and a handkerchief. Then, both of his sisters joined him, sitting across the table and giving him a stare that reminded him of their mother.
    “You can tell us,” Amelia coerced softly. She was the more nurturing and clumsy of his two sisters. Amy on the other hand was a stickler.
    “I just have to ask her some questions,” Dirk responded, stuffing his mouth.
    “What kind of questions,” Amy interrogated.
    Laying his spoon in the bowl and using the piece of cloth to wipe his mouth, he began to speak, “I need to know if she knew about Alice Mabe or not. If she did, that could have been a motive for murdering Lucius.”
    Before he could blink, Amy picked up the bowl of vegetable soup and poured it back into the pot on the stove. She thought about throwing it all over him, but that would have been a waste of perfectly good soup.
    “Get out,” Amy instructed.
    “Now, hold on just a minute, Amy,” Amelia spoke up, “I’m sure you have a perfectly good reason for this, don’t you, Dirk?”
    Glancing at the hardwood floor and the unevenness of the boards, Dirk shook his head. “No. I don’t have a good reason. Other than her husband’s dead and we don’t have any evidence. So, I’m out collecting it.”
    “Pfffh! Please!” Amy hissed. “You should be out questioning Alice Mabe! You know Nora wouldn’t do a thing like that!”
    “Or do I,” asked Dirk.
    “What on earth could you mean by that?” Amelia jerked the dishtowel from her shoulder and slapped it down on the table, glaring right at him.
    He answered, “Well. For starters, everyone in the town is afraid of her. She’s different, that’s for sure. She stays shut up in her house. She’s not very nice. And, she hates children.”
    “And so that makes her a murderer?!” Amy screamed. “We’re going with you!”
    “I’d rather you didn’t. I don’t want y’all to get her riled up,” he replied.
    “You’re afraid of her,” Amelia declared.
    “You know what. I’ve had about enough of this. I’ll just be on my way.” Dirk stood up and placed his handkerchief beside the place where his bowl once was. He pushed his chair in, donned his coat, hat, and boots, and headed back out the door.
    To his surprise, neither of his sisters followed him. He knew there was much to be done on the farm today, and honestly, they just didn’t have the time to assist him in solving a murder. He glanced back one more time to be sure Amy wasn’t running up behind him with a frying pan in her hand. She was that furious.
    Pacing himself down the path to the road, his stomach began to turn. Swallowing what bit of nervousness that was churning in his stomach, he continued on his way. About another mile down the road, was the path that cut off the road and lead to Nora’s home. It was a rather narrow path, barely large enough for a carriage. When he turned to walk to up the path, a large appaloosa horse, grey in the front and white with black spots in the back, rushed him at the fence. Dirk stopped in his tracks, putting his hands out on either side, trying to make himself look bigger. The appaloosa gave him a death stare while snorting white steam out of both of her nostrils. After a few seconds of the standoff, she turned away from him and trotted away. To be cautious, he walked slowly on the path and kept an eye out for her, in case she tried to rush the fence again.
    Still walking along the path, Dirk came to a cemetery on the left. As he approached, he saw a man digging. To waste even more time, he decided to stop in and see if he needed any help.
    “Hey, good man. You need a hand?” he asked.
    The gravedigger didn’t bother to look at him and continued to dig. His raggedy appearance and long greasy hair was unlike any person Dirk had ever seen in town before. “Looks like you could use a break,” he said, nervously.
    “Does Mrs. Lusk know you’re here, boy?” asked the gravedigger.
    “I’m on my way to see her.”
    “Then you best be on your way. A fog is rolling in. We all know what that means.” Without missing a beat, the gravedigger kept digging.
    Feeling as though his stomach was now in his throat, Dirk turned around, and continued onto Nora’s home. The fall air seemed to get thinner as he made his way up the large hill. The wind began to pick up and the smell of crushed leaves swirled around his body.
    Approaching the house, he could hear a murder of crows in the trees just off her porch. There must have been hundreds of them circling around above and flying from tree to tree. As he got closer to the home, their screeches went from calm to panic. When Nora heard this, she trudged her way toward the door.

                                                             Chapter 2: Nora Lusk
    “What do you want,” Nora yelled, blasting out of her home onto the porch. “You look like hell.”
    “It’s been a long day, Nora. I just need to ask you some questions.” Dirk threw his hands up into the air as if to say “I surrender”.
    “Alright. But if you piss me off, I can’t guarantee I won’t throw you out of the house myself.” She took her apron off and invited him in.
    At first, he was hesitant. He stood outside her home for a moment contemplating if he really should walk in. I mean, she could have killed her husband. And if she killed him, she could kill me too, he thought to himself. Yet, he remembered the sternness in the sheriff’s voice when he was given this task. Although, his last assignment was minuscule, he failed. He couldn’t fail again.
    Straightening his jacket and clearing his throat, Dirk made his way up the steps, onto the porch, and into Nora’s home. Surprisingly, it wasn’t all the townspeople had made it up to be. Yes, the crows outside were a little creepy and Nora was not a woman to be trifled with, but her home gave off a different aura. There were hooks by the door for coats. Dirk decided to hang up his jacket, and his hat, in hopes Nora would see it as a peace offering. While she fiddled with the stove, he sat down at the table and waited for her to bring him a cup of coffee. When she approached him with the coffee in hand, he sat back in his chair and removed his arms from the table, so she could sit it down in front of him. 
    “Ah,” she laughed. “Did you honestly think I was going to pour you some coffee? What do you want?” Her expression went from laughter to dead silence in an instant.
    This made Dirk take a big gulp from his empty throat. “The sheriff sent me,” he explained.
    “Of course he did,” Nora said, shaking her head. “You have 2 seconds to cut to the chase or I’m dragging you, and that chair you’re in, out my door. It would bring me much joy to see you tumble down those steps. I don’t like to beat around the bush, you know.”
    Taking another moment to think his last words through, if she were to kill him after he asked her this one question, Dirk began, “Were you aware that Lucius was sneaking around with Alice Mabe?”
    They sat staring at each other. Nora’s mind seemed to have went to another place. Then, in a moment’s notice, she burst into laughter again. She laughed so hard she began to cry. “YES! After all these years, that’s how he repaid me. By hanging around that smut.”
    Not knowing what to say next, Dirk remained quiet. It was not the answer he was expecting. If Dirk asked Nora if she killed Lucius because he was spending time with another woman, she might kill Dirk too. However, knowing that if he didn’t come back to the sheriff with answers, his odds might be the same, he dove in. “Is that why you killed him?”
    “Ha! Boy! If I wanted him dead, I wouldn’t have had to do it myself.” She took a sip of her coffee. The expression on her face was that of laying down a full house in a game of cards.
    “What do you mean?” Dirk seemed confused.
    Nora sat back in her chair and crossed her arms, “Well, if you must know. He gave the preacher counterfeit money every Sunday for about 5 years. Preacher Cliff was furious when he took all that money to the bank, only to find out it was fake. Oh! And then there’s Alice. She could have killed him because he wouldn’t leave me to be with her. He just enjoyed the thrill of secrecy. If he made it official with her, there wouldn’t be any more secrets now would there?”
    “No, I guess not.” Dirk took out his notepad and scribbled down a few words to help him remember what Nora had said.
    “You didn’t let me finish, boy. You aren’t very good at this are you?” She grinned a sadistic grin as if she knew everything he was thinking. “There’s also Silas Blanche. He told me he could treat me better than Lucius. He always had a thing for me. He could have done it!”
    Dirk wrote down a few more notes. Looking back at Nora, he seemed a bit skeptical. She was a hard woman to read. He had to remain unbiased because he had a murder to solve.
    Nora noticed this look of denial on his face. She immediately jumped up from the table and so did Dirk. He didn’t know what she was up to but stood still and watched her make her way over to the dresser. Reaching into the top drawer, Nora pulled out her .41 caliber Derringer Pocket Pistol and a note and laid them on the table in front of where Dirk was standing. “There’s your proof,” she said.
    Adjusting himself back into his chair and scooting it back up to the table, he slowly moved his hands past the weapon and to the letter, where he could see bits of a man’s handwriting. It read:
    He will pay for what he’s done to you. Then, we can be together. -Silas
    Dirk glanced back at Nora, who still had her poker face on, and said, “I’ll be taking this with me. The sheriff will want to see this.” He stuffed it into the inside of his jacket pocket.
    “Suit yourself,” she said, picking up her pistol and pointing it right at him before stuffing it back into her drawer.
    Dirk got up from his seat, seeing that it was almost dark. “Thank you for talking with me. I know it wasn’t easy.”
    “Don’t you dare think you’re going anywhere tonight. That fog is rollin’ in mighty fast. I doubt you could beat it.”
    With the expression of confusion on his face, Dirk smirked and continued onto the porch.
    “You know, Lucius died on a foggy night,” she said, running up to the screen door.
    Stopping in his tracks, Dirk thought about how much he missed while he was away. One wouldn’t think that a few years away from Hollow Springs would make that much of a difference, but it did. Growing up, he didn’t have to worry about a murderer in town, let alone a fog. “That’s just coincidence,” he replied and made his way down the porch steps.
    Outside the air was even more thin as the hair stood up on the back of his neck. The wind sounded like the ocean as it blew through the trees. Catching a glimpse of something moving out the corner of his right eye, Dirk drew his weapon just like Sheriff Warren had taught him, fast and accurately. To his dismay, it was a mere scarecrow whose arms were blowing in the wind. Placing his firearm back into the holster on his side, Dirk looked back to see if Nora was amused at the sight of his embarrassment. Luckily, she was not present at the door.
    Dirk turned to head back down the path. He listened to the creek that ran along it. No wonder Nora likes to be out here alone, he thought. It’s so peaceful.
    The hill got steeper as he took careful steps down it. He tried to plant his feet firmly onto the gravel but was very unsuccessful. Taking a step much too large for his stature, he fell to the ground. I have never been this clumsy, he thought to himself. Just then, he heard a laughing sound coming from the cemetery. Raising himself onto his knees and then onto his feet, being sure not to lose his balance, he found himself heading toward the spot where the gravedigger once stood. Looking around in the empty cemetery, he found himself surprisingly alone.
    “Hello!” he shouted, but there was no answer.
    Taking a moment to have a look around, as the fog was surrounding him and growing thicker, he examined the grave stones that laid around him. The first one he saw was beside the hole the gravedigger had dug. The headstone read: Lucille Lorraine Lusk April 18, 1889- October 12th, 1889. In the row behind that, there were two stones that read, Norma Jean Wicker November 1850- January 1875 and Peter Paul Wicker July 1852- April 1890. That must have been Nora’s parents, he thought to himself. Dirk didn’t know the family had lost a child and Mr. Wicker within the last 6 years. There were other grave stones but they had been weathered so much that they weren’t legible. Then, there at the very end, there was one more that he could read. It read: Jean Ophelia Wicker September 1869- June 1879. Dirk was astonished at the young deaths that had happened in Nora’s family. Although, it was just about like every other family during that time, Dirk thought there may be some importance to these dates and wrote them all down.
    Turning around to continue onto town, Dirk faced a dark figure standing between himself and the pathway out of the cemetery. When the figure removed the hood of its cloak, he could see it was Nora.
    “Geeze! Why don’t you just scare somebody!” Dirk yelled out of fear.
    “I saw you snooping, Mr. Ward. Whatever you’re looking for, you won’t find it here,” she said, approaching him.
    “All these young deaths. No wonder you don’t like people.”
    She looked around and back at him saying, “If you get too close to someone, you stand the chance of losing them.”
    “I can see that. Were those your parents?”
    “Sure was. Momma was two years older than daddy. She died while she was in labor with me.” Then pointing to the grave beside the hole for Lucius, she continued, “That was our baby, Lucille. She only lived for a few months. Lucius and I weren’t the same after that. Then, the next year, daddy died.”
    “I can’t imagine, Nora,” Dirk said looking around at all the stones. Then, he reached toward the stone that was away from all the others and asked, “What about this one, Jean Ophelia Wicker. Who was she?”
    “She was my older sister. She died when I was four. I watched a heavy gate fall onto her. She was crushed instantly.”
    “I’m so sorry, Nora. Maybe if everyone knew what you had been through, they would see you through different eyes, and maybe wouldn’t fear you or judge you so much.”
    Nora wiped her tears and began to shout, “You will tell no one of any of this! Do you understand? I have dealt with it by myself all of my life, I sure as hell don’t need any help or pity now.”
    Dirk nodded and paced himself, walking past Nora who was still staring at all the graves in the cemetery. He stopped and turned to look back toward her, but saw that she hadn’t moved and decided not to disturb her further.
    Heading back toward the path to town, Dirk felt like he was being watched. The fog was so thick, he could hardly see. Following the edge of the road, he was sure he had to get back to town to tell the sheriff what had transpired while he had been gone. Just as he was about to pass the place he and his sisters lived, he almost ran into Bucky, his trusty steed.
    “Hey, boy! Come here,” he said, rubbing his hands along Bucky’s nose and down his neck, fishing his hands around for the reins. Once he found the reins, he mounted and began to make his way back to town.
    Bucky was a nervous wreck. His steps weren’t as sure as they usually were and his head bobbed up and down at high intervals while walking. Buddy’s ears were constantly scanning to his front and sides. Off in the distance, Dirk and Bucky could hear something approaching.
    “Deputy Ward, what on God’s green earth are you still doing out?” the familiar voice said.
    “Well, Sheriff, I was just on my way back to you.” He stopped his horse right beside the sheriff’s.
    “What’d you find out, son?”
    “A lot,” he said, holding up the note Nora gave him and the notes he had taken while at her home.
    “Alright. Let’s head back. During a heavy fog is no time to be creeping around in this town, you know.”
    “That’s what people keep telling me,” Dirk replied, but before he could say anything else, the sheriff had already disappeared into the thick blanket of fog. Dirk couldn’t even hear the sheriff’s horse’s footsteps any longer.
    Finally, Dirk reached the sheriff’s office, where Sheriff Warren was sitting at his desk with his feet propped up. Entering the establishment, Dirk removed his hat and coat and laid the information down on Sheriff Warren’s desk.
    First, he picked up the letter from Silas and read it. “Hogwash!” he blurted, tossing the note back across the table toward Dirk, as though it were a playing card. Next, he picked up the notes Dirk had taken on who Nora thought had murdered her husband. “My best bet is, it was her,” Sheriff Warren said, reading Dirk’s facial expression.
    “You think it was Nora?” Dirk interrogated.
    “Why wouldn’t it be, is the real question, Deputy. Her husband was a menace. He was running around on her and giving the preacher counterfeit money. She could have saw a way out with Silas Blanche. She knew he liked her. What if she wanted to be with him, so she killed Lucius.” Sheriff Warren glared at Dirk as though it was Dirk’s problem to deal with.
    “She’s just been through so much,” Dirk continued.
    “Don’t you think we all have, Deputy?” The sheriff’s voice shook Dirk to his bones. “Her husband’s funeral is tomorrow.”
    “Let me guess,” Dirk began, “you want me to go.”
    “You can bet your pretty penny we will all be there, son. There’s nothing more telling than the reactions of those closest to the victim. We’re gonna be lookin’ for anything out of the ordinary.” He slipped the list of suspects and Silas’ note into his shirt pocket and gave Dirk a wink.
    “What do you mean?” Dirk was confused.
    “You’ll see, boy. I can guarantee it.” Sheriff Warren put his cigar out in the ashtray on his desk and walked to the door. After sliding into his jacket and putting his hat on, he opened the door. “Better get home. We’ll save the speculating for after Lucius’ funeral. Rest that sharp mind. We’re gonna need as many eyes as possible tomorrow.”
    After the sheriff walked out and rode away, Dirk gathered his thoughts and tirelessly headed home.
                                                         Chapter 3: The Funeral
    After Dirk left that evening, Nora sat outside in a rocking chair on her porch. The sun was setting and the wind was brushing through the trees. She closed her eyes imagining she was at the ocean. Her daddy always told her if she ever wanted to visit the ocean, all she had to do was close her eyes. The force of the wind through the trees created a wave-like sound. Back and forth, the trees would move, just like the ocean waves. Her daddy always told her if she wanted to see the ocean, all she had to do was look at the hay field. The breeze combing the hay in sheets made the hay have the appearance of ocean waves. Nora didn’t have to go too far to escape her town. In an instant, she could close her eyes and be anywhere she wanted to be. Hearing that her crows had come home to nest for the evening, she went inside to get them some feed.
    Walking back onto the porch, she threw the seed onto the yard and watched all of her friends flock to it. It was just cornmeal, but it was fascinating to watch the whole murder rush to it and devour it. Nora sat back in her chair and watched them. She thought about Lucius and the life they once knew. She thought about their daughter and her parents. She thought about the many generations that worked the very land she was now in possession of. Next thing she knew, she heard a ping sound on the porch. Looking down, she picked up a shiny key. The crows always brought her gifts in exchange for feeding them. She’s made jewelry, decorations, and wind chimes out of all the odd shiny objects they had given her. Without thinking of this object any differently, she stuck it into her shoe so she could place it in her junk drawer later.
    Realizing it was almost dark, she went back inside, stoked the fire, and blew out her oil lamps.

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                                                 Chapter 1: Sheriff Warren
    “How well do you know Mrs. Nora Lusk?” Sheriff Warren asked Deputy Ward.
    “She’s best friends with my sisters and she’s our neighbor. She lives right beside the old home place that my sisters occupy. I live in the cottage just outside the home, but still on the family property.” Deputy Ward leaned forward in his chair saying, “We’ve crossed paths a time or two. Why do you care?”
    “Well,” said Sheriff Warren, leaning back in his chair, “you’re the deputy. Why don’t you tell me?”
    Deputy Dirk Ward looked around the sheriff’s office. It was stick built, dusty, and had only one jail cell in it. There were three chairs, behind three desks, for the 3 lawmen in the town. The first, Sheriff Neil Warren, had served the longest. He knew the most about the town and how to catch a criminal. The second, Dirk Ward, the youngest of three siblings, who just moved back from Buxton, recently joined and was learning the ropes. Lastly, there’s Jessup Ash, the other deputy. He’s a trigger happy know-it-all who’s full of himself. Luckily, he had the day off so Dirk didn’t have to listen to him talk about himself all day.
    Thinking back on Sheriff Warren’s question, Dirk knew he was being tested. “Well,” he began, “her husband just died three days ago and we don’t have any suspects. All we know is, he was shot to death behind his blacksmith shop, here in town. We don’t have any witnesses.”
    “You missed one thing,” Sheriff Warren said, putting his pointer finger in Dirk’s face.
    “What’s that?” Deputy Ward asked, looking Sheriff Warren in the eyes, trying to size him up.
    Sheriff Warren’s slicked back black hair, curled up mustache, burning cigar, and death stare gave him a rough and tough appearance. Looking at Sheriff Warren, Dirk knew he didn’t put up with any nonsense.
    “Lucius Lusk, Nora’s husband, was unfaithful.” Sheriff Warren’s eyebrows raised as though he had found the fountain of youth or they key to happiness.
    “With whom,” Dirk inquired.
    “Alice Mabe. It was confirmed by Alice herself the day after he was found, although the whole town knew what was going on.”
    Puzzled, Dirk began to think. He then said, “Did Nora know about this?”
    Sheriff Warren’s eyes widened as he took the cigar out of his mouth and let out a puff of smoke, saying, “Why don’t you find out, boy.”
    This was the first murder case that Dirk had been assigned to. To be honest, he was nervous. He was nervous because it was his first major case, and because he was investigating his sisters’ best friend. The only other cases he had been tasked with was to find the owner of the stray dog that had been hanging around the sheriff’s office. Unfortunately, he was unsuccessful. So, Buddy, the Golden Retriever, was now property of the Sheriff’s office. He was of no use to them except keeping the bed in the empty cell warm for a prisoner who would likely never fill it.
    Getting up from his chair, Dirk donned his gun, hat, and badge. He took a hint from Sheriff Warren and excused himself from the intensity of the room. Walking outside the sheriff’s office, Dirk could see the saloon straight across the dirt road. A few buildings down to the right was the mercantile and the school house, where Alice taught the children of Hollow Springs. A few buildings down to the left were the blacksmith shop, the sawmill, and the Inn. The saloon and mercantile were owned by Alice Mabe’s father. The sawmill and Inn were owned by the Jensen’s. Glancing back toward his horse, Bucky, Dirk hopped on and headed down the only road in and out of town, to Nora’s house.
    Passing several townspeople on his way out, and trying to act respectfully, Dirk nodded his head and kept his hat in line just above his eyes. Sheriff Warren said that’s the way the law should wear a hat. It gave them a bit of an edge. Creeping along the path, Dirk could see his breath in the cold fall air. He could see Bucky’s too. It looked as if the pitch black horse ran on steam, and his nostrils were the valves that the steam was released from.
    A few moments later, Dirk was outside of town. He continued on the desolate, and not very well maintained, gravel path. Passing him on either side was fields of corn with scare crows in them. Dirk felt small because he could barely see over the tall rows. Before he knew it, a crow had landed on the fence to his right, letting out a big “squaaaaakk”! This loud screech sent Bucky into a fit. Before he knew it, Dirk was on the ground and Bucky was nowhere to be found.
    “Bucky!” Dirk cried, clicking his tongue to bring his dear friend back. However, after calling for a few moments, he decided to continue on. He knew the sheriff would be furious if he couldn’t complete this one simple task, which was proving to be more of a pain than he had anticipated.
    Since he was almost to his family’s farm, where his sisters Amy and Amelia lived, he decided to go there to dry off and warm up. From the road, Dirk could see the house where his sisters lived and the cottage where he lived. There were cornrows on both sides leading up to the old family home place. Dirk’s parents moved away when they inherited Dirk’s grandfather’s farm in Buxton, a nearby town. So, their parents left their 100 acre farm to their three children to care for.
    Making his way up to the home, Dirk saw Amelia come out of the house first.
    “What have you gotten yourself into now, brother?” Amelia asked, intently.
    “About a mile back, Bucky got spooked and bucked me off.”
    “Well, daddy didn’t call him Bucky for nothing,” she said with a chuckle. “Let’s get you inside. Amy’s made some homemade vegetable soup.”
    Walking up the steps into their tiny home, Dirk could feel the lightness of the crisp air and the crunch of leaves under his feet. Peering into the house brought a wave of warmth and fond childhood memories.
    “What are you doing here?” Amy asked.
    “Just horsing around,” Dirk laughed, glancing back at Amelia who had already taken his jacket, his hat, and his boots, and set him a place at the table.
    “Do you want soup or not?” Amy interrogated.
    “Of course.” he returned.
    “Then you better tell me what you’re doing all the way out here during the time you’re supposed to be working for the sheriff.” Amy stirred the pot and scooped some out into a bowl. She wouldn’t put anymore into it until he gave her some answers. On the second scoop, she held it over the bowl while staring him down until he began to speak.
    “It’s Nora,” he said, giving into her demeanor.
    “I knew it! I swear, Dirk. If you…” Amy was furious. She was so furious, she almost spilled the soup. “She just lost her husband!”
    “Calm down. It’s just for questioning,” he assured her.
    She sat the bowl of soup in front of him with a glass of water and a handkerchief. Then, both of his sisters joined him, sitting across the table and giving him a stare that reminded him of their mother.
    “You can tell us,” Amelia coerced softly. She was the more nurturing and clumsy of his two sisters. Amy on the other hand was a stickler.
    “I just have to ask her some questions,” Dirk responded, stuffing his mouth.
    “What kind of questions,” Amy interrogated.
    Laying his spoon in the bowl and using the piece of cloth to wipe his mouth, he began to speak, “I need to know if she knew about Alice Mabe or not. If she did, that could have been a motive for murdering Lucius.”
    Before he could blink, Amy picked up the bowl of vegetable soup and poured it back into the pot on the stove. She thought about throwing it all over him, but that would have been a waste of perfectly good soup.
    “Get out,” Amy instructed.
    “Now, hold on just a minute, Amy,” Amelia spoke up, “I’m sure you have a perfectly good reason for this, don’t you, Dirk?”
    Glancing at the hardwood floor and the unevenness of the boards, Dirk shook his head. “No. I don’t have a good reason. Other than her husband’s dead and we don’t have any evidence. So, I’m out collecting it.”
    “Pfffh! Please!” Amy hissed. “You should be out questioning Alice Mabe! You know Nora wouldn’t do a thing like that!”
    “Or do I,” asked Dirk.
    “What on earth could you mean by that?” Amelia jerked the dishtowel from her shoulder and slapped it down on the table, glaring right at him.
    He answered, “Well. For starters, everyone in the town is afraid of her. She’s different, that’s for sure. She stays shut up in her house. She’s not very nice. And, she hates children.”
    “And so that makes her a murderer?!” Amy screamed. “We’re going with you!”
    “I’d rather you didn’t. I don’t want y’all to get her riled up,” he replied.
    “You’re afraid of her,” Amelia declared.
    “You know what. I’ve had about enough of this. I’ll just be on my way.” Dirk stood up and placed his handkerchief beside the place where his bowl once was. He pushed his chair in, donned his coat, hat, and boots, and headed back out the door.
    To his surprise, neither of his sisters followed him. He knew there was much to be done on the farm today, and honestly, they just didn’t have the time to assist him in solving a murder. He glanced back one more time to be sure Amy wasn’t running up behind him with a frying pan in her hand. She was that furious.
    Pacing himself down the path to the road, his stomach began to turn. Swallowing what bit of nervousness that was churning in his stomach, he continued on his way. About another mile down the road, was the path that cut off the road and lead to Nora’s home. It was a rather narrow path, barely large enough for a carriage. When he turned to walk to up the path, a large appaloosa horse, grey in the front and white with black spots in the back, rushed him at the fence. Dirk stopped in his tracks, putting his hands out on either side, trying to make himself look bigger. The appaloosa gave him a death stare while snorting white steam out of both of her nostrils. After a few seconds of the standoff, she turned away from him and trotted away. To be cautious, he walked slowly on the path and kept an eye out for her, in case she tried to rush the fence again.
    Still walking along the path, Dirk came to a cemetery on the left. As he approached, he saw a man digging. To waste even more time, he decided to stop in and see if he needed any help.
    “Hey, good man. You need a hand?” he asked.
    The gravedigger didn’t bother to look at him and continued to dig. His raggedy appearance and long greasy hair was unlike any person Dirk had ever seen in town before. “Looks like you could use a break,” he said, nervously.
    “Does Mrs. Lusk know you’re here, boy?” asked the gravedigger.
    “I’m on my way to see her.”
    “Then you best be on your way. A fog is rolling in. We all know what that means.” Without missing a beat, the gravedigger kept digging.
    Feeling as though his stomach was now in his throat, Dirk turned around, and continued onto Nora’s home. The fall air seemed to get thinner as he made his way up the large hill. The wind began to pick up and the smell of crushed leaves swirled around his body.
    Approaching the house, he could hear a murder of crows in the trees just off her porch. There must have been hundreds of them circling around above and flying from tree to tree. As he got closer to the home, their screeches went from calm to panic. When Nora heard this, she trudged her way toward the door.

                                                             Chapter 2: Nora Lusk
    “What do you want,” Nora yelled, blasting out of her home onto the porch. “You look like hell.”
    “It’s been a long day, Nora. I just need to ask you some questions.” Dirk threw his hands up into the air as if to say “I surrender”.
    “Alright. But if you piss me off, I can’t guarantee I won’t throw you out of the house myself.” She took her apron off and invited him in.
    At first, he was hesitant. He stood outside her home for a moment contemplating if he really should walk in. I mean, she could have killed her husband. And if she killed him, she could kill me too, he thought to himself. Yet, he remembered the sternness in the sheriff’s voice when he was given this task. Although, his last assignment was minuscule, he failed. He couldn’t fail again.
    Straightening his jacket and clearing his throat, Dirk made his way up the steps, onto the porch, and into Nora’s home. Surprisingly, it wasn’t all the townspeople had made it up to be. Yes, the crows outside were a little creepy and Nora was not a woman to be trifled with, but her home gave off a different aura. There were hooks by the door for coats. Dirk decided to hang up his jacket, and his hat, in hopes Nora would see it as a peace offering. While she fiddled with the stove, he sat down at the table and waited for her to bring him a cup of coffee. When she approached him with the coffee in hand, he sat back in his chair and removed his arms from the table, so she could sit it down in front of him. 
    “Ah,” she laughed. “Did you honestly think I was going to pour you some coffee? What do you want?” Her expression went from laughter to dead silence in an instant.
    This made Dirk take a big gulp from his empty throat. “The sheriff sent me,” he explained.
    “Of course he did,” Nora said, shaking her head. “You have 2 seconds to cut to the chase or I’m dragging you, and that chair you’re in, out my door. It would bring me much joy to see you tumble down those steps. I don’t like to beat around the bush, you know.”
    Taking another moment to think his last words through, if she were to kill him after he asked her this one question, Dirk began, “Were you aware that Lucius was sneaking around with Alice Mabe?”
    They sat staring at each other. Nora’s mind seemed to have went to another place. Then, in a moment’s notice, she burst into laughter again. She laughed so hard she began to cry. “YES! After all these years, that’s how he repaid me. By hanging around that smut.”
    Not knowing what to say next, Dirk remained quiet. It was not the answer he was expecting. If Dirk asked Nora if she killed Lucius because he was spending time with another woman, she might kill Dirk too. However, knowing that if he didn’t come back to the sheriff with answers, his odds might be the same, he dove in. “Is that why you killed him?”
    “Ha! Boy! If I wanted him dead, I wouldn’t have had to do it myself.” She took a sip of her coffee. The expression on her face was that of laying down a full house in a game of cards.
    “What do you mean?” Dirk seemed confused.
    Nora sat back in her chair and crossed her arms, “Well, if you must know. He gave the preacher counterfeit money every Sunday for about 5 years. Preacher Cliff was furious when he took all that money to the bank, only to find out it was fake. Oh! And then there’s Alice. She could have killed him because he wouldn’t leave me to be with her. He just enjoyed the thrill of secrecy. If he made it official with her, there wouldn’t be any more secrets now would there?”
    “No, I guess not.” Dirk took out his notepad and scribbled down a few words to help him remember what Nora had said.
    “You didn’t let me finish, boy. You aren’t very good at this are you?” She grinned a sadistic grin as if she knew everything he was thinking. “There’s also Silas Blanche. He told me he could treat me better than Lucius. He always had a thing for me. He could have done it!”
    Dirk wrote down a few more notes. Looking back at Nora, he seemed a bit skeptical. She was a hard woman to read. He had to remain unbiased because he had a murder to solve.
    Nora noticed this look of denial on his face. She immediately jumped up from the table and so did Dirk. He didn’t know what she was up to but stood still and watched her make her way over to the dresser. Reaching into the top drawer, Nora pulled out her .41 caliber Derringer Pocket Pistol and a note and laid them on the table in front of where Dirk was standing. “There’s your proof,” she said.
    Adjusting himself back into his chair and scooting it back up to the table, he slowly moved his hands past the weapon and to the letter, where he could see bits of a man’s handwriting. It read:
    He will pay for what he’s done to you. Then, we can be together. -Silas
    Dirk glanced back at Nora, who still had her poker face on, and said, “I’ll be taking this with me. The sheriff will want to see this.” He stuffed it into the inside of his jacket pocket.
    “Suit yourself,” she said, picking up her pistol and pointing it right at him before stuffing it back into her drawer.
    Dirk got up from his seat, seeing that it was almost dark. “Thank you for talking with me. I know it wasn’t easy.”
    “Don’t you dare think you’re going anywhere tonight. That fog is rollin’ in mighty fast. I doubt you could beat it.”
    With the expression of confusion on his face, Dirk smirked and continued onto the porch.
    “You know, Lucius died on a foggy night,” she said, running up to the screen door.
    Stopping in his tracks, Dirk thought about how much he missed while he was away. One wouldn’t think that a few years away from Hollow Springs would make that much of a difference, but it did. Growing up, he didn’t have to worry about a murderer in town, let alone a fog. “That’s just coincidence,” he replied and made his way down the porch steps.
    Outside the air was even more thin as the hair stood up on the back of his neck. The wind sounded like the ocean as it blew through the trees. Catching a glimpse of something moving out the corner of his right eye, Dirk drew his weapon just like Sheriff Warren had taught him, fast and accurately. To his dismay, it was a mere scarecrow whose arms were blowing in the wind. Placing his firearm back into the holster on his side, Dirk looked back to see if Nora was amused at the sight of his embarrassment. Luckily, she was not present at the door.
    Dirk turned to head back down the path. He listened to the creek that ran along it. No wonder Nora likes to be out here alone, he thought. It’s so peaceful.
    The hill got steeper as he took careful steps down it. He tried to plant his feet firmly onto the gravel but was very unsuccessful. Taking a step much too large for his stature, he fell to the ground. I have never been this clumsy, he thought to himself. Just then, he heard a laughing sound coming from the cemetery. Raising himself onto his knees and then onto his feet, being sure not to lose his balance, he found himself heading toward the spot where the gravedigger once stood. Looking around in the empty cemetery, he found himself surprisingly alone.
    “Hello!” he shouted, but there was no answer.
    Taking a moment to have a look around, as the fog was surrounding him and growing thicker, he examined the grave stones that laid around him. The first one he saw was beside the hole the gravedigger had dug. The headstone read: Lucille Lorraine Lusk April 18, 1889- October 12th, 1889. In the row behind that, there were two stones that read, Norma Jean Wicker November 1850- January 1875 and Peter Paul Wicker July 1852- April 1890. That must have been Nora’s parents, he thought to himself. Dirk didn’t know the family had lost a child and Mr. Wicker within the last 6 years. There were other grave stones but they had been weathered so much that they weren’t legible. Then, there at the very end, there was one more that he could read. It read: Jean Ophelia Wicker September 1869- June 1879. Dirk was astonished at the young deaths that had happened in Nora’s family. Although, it was just about like every other family during that time, Dirk thought there may be some importance to these dates and wrote them all down.
    Turning around to continue onto town, Dirk faced a dark figure standing between himself and the pathway out of the cemetery. When the figure removed the hood of its cloak, he could see it was Nora.
    “Geeze! Why don’t you just scare somebody!” Dirk yelled out of fear.
    “I saw you snooping, Mr. Ward. Whatever you’re looking for, you won’t find it here,” she said, approaching him.
    “All these young deaths. No wonder you don’t like people.”
    She looked around and back at him saying, “If you get too close to someone, you stand the chance of losing them.”
    “I can see that. Were those your parents?”
    “Sure was. Momma was two years older than daddy. She died while she was in labor with me.” Then pointing to the grave beside the hole for Lucius, she continued, “That was our baby, Lucille. She only lived for a few months. Lucius and I weren’t the same after that. Then, the next year, daddy died.”
    “I can’t imagine, Nora,” Dirk said looking around at all the stones. Then, he reached toward the stone that was away from all the others and asked, “What about this one, Jean Ophelia Wicker. Who was she?”
    “She was my older sister. She died when I was four. I watched a heavy gate fall onto her. She was crushed instantly.”
    “I’m so sorry, Nora. Maybe if everyone knew what you had been through, they would see you through different eyes, and maybe wouldn’t fear you or judge you so much.”
    Nora wiped her tears and began to shout, “You will tell no one of any of this! Do you understand? I have dealt with it by myself all of my life, I sure as hell don’t need any help or pity now.”
    Dirk nodded and paced himself, walking past Nora who was still staring at all the graves in the cemetery. He stopped and turned to look back toward her, but saw that she hadn’t moved and decided not to disturb her further.
    Heading back toward the path to town, Dirk felt like he was being watched. The fog was so thick, he could hardly see. Following the edge of the road, he was sure he had to get back to town to tell the sheriff what had transpired while he had been gone. Just as he was about to pass the place he and his sisters lived, he almost ran into Bucky, his trusty steed.
    “Hey, boy! Come here,” he said, rubbing his hands along Bucky’s nose and down his neck, fishing his hands around for the reins. Once he found the reins, he mounted and began to make his way back to town.
    Bucky was a nervous wreck. His steps weren’t as sure as they usually were and his head bobbed up and down at high intervals while walking. Buddy’s ears were constantly scanning to his front and sides. Off in the distance, Dirk and Bucky could hear something approaching.
    “Deputy Ward, what on God’s green earth are you still doing out?” the familiar voice said.
    “Well, Sheriff, I was just on my way back to you.” He stopped his horse right beside the sheriff’s.
    “What’d you find out, son?”
    “A lot,” he said, holding up the note Nora gave him and the notes he had taken while at her home.
    “Alright. Let’s head back. During a heavy fog is no time to be creeping around in this town, you know.”
    “That’s what people keep telling me,” Dirk replied, but before he could say anything else, the sheriff had already disappeared into the thick blanket of fog. Dirk couldn’t even hear the sheriff’s horse’s footsteps any longer.
    Finally, Dirk reached the sheriff’s office, where Sheriff Warren was sitting at his desk with his feet propped up. Entering the establishment, Dirk removed his hat and coat and laid the information down on Sheriff Warren’s desk.
    First, he picked up the letter from Silas and read it. “Hogwash!” he blurted, tossing the note back across the table toward Dirk, as though it were a playing card. Next, he picked up the notes Dirk had taken on who Nora thought had murdered her husband. “My best bet is, it was her,” Sheriff Warren said, reading Dirk’s facial expression.
    “You think it was Nora?” Dirk interrogated.
    “Why wouldn’t it be, is the real question, Deputy. Her husband was a menace. He was running around on her and giving the preacher counterfeit money. She could have saw a way out with Silas Blanche. She knew he liked her. What if she wanted to be with him, so she killed Lucius.” Sheriff Warren glared at Dirk as though it was Dirk’s problem to deal with.
    “She’s just been through so much,” Dirk continued.
    “Don’t you think we all have, Deputy?” The sheriff’s voice shook Dirk to his bones. “Her husband’s funeral is tomorrow.”
    “Let me guess,” Dirk began, “you want me to go.”
    “You can bet your pretty penny we will all be there, son. There’s nothing more telling than the reactions of those closest to the victim. We’re gonna be lookin’ for anything out of the ordinary.” He slipped the list of suspects and Silas’ note into his shirt pocket and gave Dirk a wink.
    “What do you mean?” Dirk was confused.
    “You’ll see, boy. I can guarantee it.” Sheriff Warren put his cigar out in the ashtray on his desk and walked to the door. After sliding into his jacket and putting his hat on, he opened the door. “Better get home. We’ll save the speculating for after Lucius’ funeral. Rest that sharp mind. We’re gonna need as many eyes as possible tomorrow.”
    After the sheriff walked out and rode away, Dirk gathered his thoughts and tirelessly headed home.
                                                         Chapter 3: The Funeral
    After Dirk left that evening, Nora sat outside in a rocking chair on her porch. The sun was setting and the wind was brushing through the trees. She closed her eyes imagining she was at the ocean. Her daddy always told her if she ever wanted to visit the ocean, all she had to do was close her eyes. The force of the wind through the trees created a wave-like sound. Back and forth, the trees would move, just like the ocean waves. Her daddy always told her if she wanted to see the ocean, all she had to do was look at the hay field. The breeze combing the hay in sheets made the hay have the appearance of ocean waves. Nora didn’t have to go too far to escape her town. In an instant, she could close her eyes and be anywhere she wanted to be. Hearing that her crows had come home to nest for the evening, she went inside to get them some feed.
    Walking back onto the porch, she threw the seed onto the yard and watched all of her friends flock to it. It was just cornmeal, but it was fascinating to watch the whole murder rush to it and devour it. Nora sat back in her chair and watched them. She thought about Lucius and the life they once knew. She thought about their daughter and her parents. She thought about the many generations that worked the very land she was now in possession of. Next thing she knew, she heard a ping sound on the porch. Looking down, she picked up a shiny key. The crows always brought her gifts in exchange for feeding them. She’s made jewelry, decorations, and wind chimes out of all the odd shiny objects they had given her. Without thinking of this object any differently, she stuck it into her shoe so she could place it in her junk drawer later.
    Realizing it was almost dark, she went back inside, stoked the fire, and blew out her oil lamps.

Thank you for taking the time to read an excerpt from Nora From the Hollow! Please let me know what you think! I can’t wait to publish the book in September. I look forward to hearing from you!

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70+ People Have Escorting Mr.Colburn in Their Hands!!

It has been about a month and a half since releasing my first book. So far, there have been 70 copies of the book distributed! Now, mind you, a portion of these were free units. However, it is still gratifying to know 70 plus people have a copy of my book (some people have shared copies)! The experience of releasing my first book has definitely opened my eyes to possibilities I never even thought was there. I didn’t expect my first book to make it into the hands of 70 people, but I’m grateful. It also makes me really excited to release my second book in the next 2 months. My second book is comprised of more characters, more interactions, and more drama. My first book had a Hallmark feel to it, and my second adds mystery and drama to that.

Recently, I also received my 5th review for Escorting Mr. Colburn. This one is on Good Reads, check it out below:37340523_255581281889355_8318536991545229312_n.jpg

This seems to be the common theme among reviews. The book was hard to put down and it had a warm feeling throughout, which is exactly what I was going for. However, Nora From the Hollow, my second book, will have a darker feel to it. Yet, it will be just as engaging and interesting. Because I’m releasing it in the fall of the year (and I love a good thriller mystery during my favorite time of the year), it is a perfect fit when curling up next to a fire while watching the leaves fall outside. Check out the cover, which fits the book perfectly, below:

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I can’t wait to see how far my second book goes. I’m confident that everyone will enjoy the second one just as much as they did the first! Both of these books were such a delight to write. When I can’t stop writing, I know it’s going to be a great book.

I hope you all are doing well. I very much enjoy hearing from many different people on their experiences of reading and writing.

’til next time,

Marlena Owens

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Cover and Info on Nora From The Hollow, My Next Book

     I am SO excited to show you all the cover of Nora From The Hollow!! This book will be available Saturday, September 22nd, the first day of fall!

If you’re like me, and love fall, this book will satisfy all of your fall time cravings. There’s murder, mystery, spooky scenes, and twists and turns you’ll never expect! Heck, I didn’t even expect half of them!😂 As always, my books are comprised of elements that all ages can enjoy. So, get ready to snuggle up by the fire, sip on some hot chocolate, and follow Nora’s story as she finds out who murdered her husband, Lucius.

Here’s the brief book description:

In the fall of 1895, in the small town of Hollow Springs, there have been a string of murders. Most of these killings have happened during a fog, causing the townspeople to create superstitions around this naturally occurring event. This time, it was Nora Lusk’s husband, Lucius. Lucius wasn’t perfect. He was actually far from perfect. This leads Nora to make a list of three people who were capable of killing her husband. Lucius was known for putting counterfeit money into the church’s offering plate. Therefore, the angry Preacher Cliff is the first suspect. The second, Alice Mabe, was Lucius’ lover. She seemed like the type who would kill someone for the simple reason that if she couldn’t have them, no one could. Lastly, Silas Blanche, saw the way Lucius treated Nora and looked forward to the day when he could treat Nora better. Yet, he couldn’t do it with Lucius in the way. Ironically, when the town points their fingers at Nora, she and her beloved friends must work quickly to investigate the twists and tangles of the deep family rivalries, and the small town secrets of Hollow Springs, to clear her name! Just when you think you know what happened and why, another curve ball is thrown into the mix!

About the cover:
Once you read the book, the cover will make perfect sense. I hope you all enjoy reading it just as much as I have enjoyed writing it!!

Some great characters you’ll love:

Nora Lusk: She’s the anti-social crazy lady with a short fuse that the town fears. Yet, she has a soft side for her friends.

Dirk Ward: He’s one of the sheriff’s deputies who finds himself tasked with solving the murder of Lucius Lusk, Nora’s husband.

Amy and Amelia Ward: Sisters to Dirk and best friends/neighbors of Nora, serve as accomplices in the complicated investigation.

 

One interesting thing to note, my great grandmother’s maiden name was Nora Lusk. When searching for creepy dark names for my characters, I knew I had to use her name as the main character! Although I never got to meet her, I’m sure she would be thrilled!

 

Thank you all for reading,
Marlena Owens

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The Reviews Are Coming In!

It’s only been about a week and a half since the paperback version of Escorting Mr. Colburn was released and only a few days since the e-book version has been released. So far, this is what readers are saying:

 

The amount of support that I’ve received with releasing my first book has been overwhelming, in a great way! I was not expecting this many people to read, let alone purchase something I had written. Not because I thought my writing was bad. I’ve always gotten positive feedback on my writing skills. However, I never knew anyone would care enough to read my work. Now that I am over the initial anxiety of publishing my first book, I am keeping the momentum up and am working on my second book! It’s amazing how I’ve gone from “I wonder if I can do this” to “Woah! I’m actually doing this!” The feedback from family and friends has greatly boosted my confidence. I am humbled by the amount of support and can’t thank everyone enough! I’ve honestly learned the only limits you face are the ones you set upon yourself!

Thank you for reading!

Marlena Owens

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About a Book: Escorting Mr. Colburn By Marlena Owens

I just published a book called Escorting Mr. Colburn. It is available on Amazon in paperback and eBook form. Many of my friends and family have purchased it. I can’t wait to hear what they have to say about it!

I got the idea for this book a few years ago but didn’t get the courage to finally finish it until recently. I would like to compare publishing your first book to riding home from the hospital with your first baby. You don’t know what to expect, you feel vulnerable, and you’re responsible for what you’ve created. I have always enjoyed writing but it took me gaining confidence in myself before I could share it with others.

About the book:

Justine lives in New York City with her brother, Sam. Their parents just passed tragically a few months before in a bus accident. As if life can’t get any harder, Sam’s school tuition is due in one month. With the help of her energetic and unique neighbor, Wanda, Justine explores her options. She doesn’t have any hobbies and isn’t very crafty. However, she knows the city like the back of her hand. Then she had the idea to start a personal travel agent business. Justine would accompany tourists to their destinations and be their personal tour guide. Yet, when she places her ad, she only gets one reply. Little did she know, that’s the only reply she would need!

Come on a journey with me, exploring the 3 most well-known destinations to visit in New York City!

This novel explores the process of grief and how our loved ones speak to us even after they’re gone. It also digs into living with regret after the death of a loved one. Lastly, this novel shows that one can find beauty in moving on. I hope you enjoy it.

Read the first two chapters for free via the link below!

https://madambraintrust.wordpress.com/2018/06/07/preview-the-first-two-chapters-of-my-new-book-2/

Visit my Amazon author page to purchase:

amazon.com/author/marlenaowens

As always, be sure to leave a review! I look forward to hearing from you!

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Preview the First Two Chapters of My New Book For Free!

Be sure to let me know what you think!

Thank you for reading!

 

Escorting Mr. Colburn

Marlena Owens

 

Chapter 1

    “Taxi. Taxi,” Justine yelled as she ran along the side of the street with her 12-year-old brother, Sam, in tow. Feeling hopeless as she had already spilled her coffee, burned her forehead with her straightener, and slipped on one of Sam’s model cars, Justine was sure catching a taxi was the least of her worries.

    “Justine! We’re going to be late!” Sam reminded her, for the fifth time.

    “I know, Sam. I’m trying.” Justine’s exhausted look turned to a smile knowing that finally, a taxi had stopped. “Jump in!” She told him.

    “Where to, Miss?” The cab driver asked.

    “Prescott Middle, please,” Justine replied. She and Sam made themselves comfy for the ride.

    Justine loved the city. The smells weren’t always pleasant, but she loved the rush. The busyness of Manhattan. There was always someone going somewhere and doing something in this big city. Looking out the window, she admired the tall buildings that she had grown up around. Thinking of these buildings and her childhood made her think of her parents. She missed them. She knew Sam missed them too. She thought about the way her mother always gave her the best hugs. She thought about how her father always made sure she was up-to-par on her swing. She remembered life the way it was. A tear fell from her eye, but as fast as it fell, she wiped it away. Sam was looking out his window too. Justine supposed he was nervous.

    “Are you okay?” Justine asked.

    “I guess.”

    “Seventh grade won’t be so bad.” She reassured him.

    “I guess not. At least I get to go to my school and not a different one.”  

    “You let me worry about that, Sam. Are you excited to meet your teacher?”

    “Mr. Sizemore? He coached me in pee-wee football, don’t you remember?”

    “I’m sorry, I don’t.” She told him. But my mother would have, she thought to herself.

    “How much longer, Amir?” Justine asked the cab driver. Amir was a cab driver that Justine had ridden with many times. He is Indian, but he loves it here in The States. He immigrated from India as a young boy, with his parents. Justine loves to ride with Amir because of his accent and his stories.

    “I’d say about 10 minutes if this light would ever change, Miss Justine,” Amir replied.

    “Do you have any good stories today?” Sam asked Amir.

    “Why, sure I do. Did you ever hear about the Indian woman who ate the cow?” He joked.

    “Nope,” Sam said.

    “She became a God. That’s why we’re not allowed to eat our special cows. HA HA HA!”

    Sam and Justine didn’t understand Amir’s culture but made a slight laugh of the dry humor anyway. Their mother and father rode with Amir quite often, too. Amir knew just how to put a smile on their mother’s face.  

    “You know, a cow almost took my leg one time. I was walking the street and slipped on a pot and my leg fell into the cow’s mouth. Luckily, the cow was asleep and didn’t even wake up!” Amir giggled.

    “That was a good one, Amir,” Justine said.

    “Here you are, Miss,” Amir announced.

Justine opened the door, paid Amir, and waited for Sam to exit the car. Prescott Middle School was a large private school on the other end of Manhattan. Kids and their parents were flooding the school. Today is the day the students get to meet their teachers, receive their class schedules, and their supply lists for each class. Justine knew Sam was excited about seeing his friends again. A lot had happened over the summer. Luckily, with Sam going back to school, Justine could find a job and start bringing in income. The only thing that suffered in Justine’s life was her college experience. She dropped out when her parents passed away a few months ago. It was impossible for her to make funeral arrangements, take care of her brother, and manage her parents’ estate.

    Sam ran by Justine to greet some of his friends.

    “I’m going to find Mr. Sizemore. I’ll call you when I’m finished.” Justine told Sam. He nodded, as he was too busy to talk to his sister now. He had some much needed catching up to do with his friends.

    Justine walked through the tall automatic doors. It felt, to her, as if she was entering a mall. Unfortunately, it wasn’t. She walked into the front office to get directions from the office secretary.

    “Can I help you?” The secretary asked.

Justine looked down at the name tag on the secretary’s desk. It read Jackie Bryant.

    “Mrs. Bryant, Could you tell me where Mr. Sizemore’s office is?” Justine asked.

   “Sure. He’s in room 223, down the hall and to the right. If you reach the stairs, you’ve gone too far.” Mrs. Bryant replied.

   “Thank you,” Justine replied and set off to find Mr. Sizemore’s classroom. The halls were wide and seemed like they went on forever. Justine turned the corner and saw the stairs. Immediately to the right was Mr. Sizemore standing in the doorway to his classroom.

    “Hey, Justine. How are you? He asked.

    “Just the person I wanted to see. I’m doing great. Sam is in your class this year.”  

    “I noticed. How is he holding up?”

    “He’s okay,” Justine said. “He’s excited to get back into school. He missed his friends over the summer, which felt like an eternity.”

    “I’m sure it did.” Mr. Sizemore said. “Here is his class schedule and his supply list. I don’t require much for my students, but if you need help with anything, just let me know. I know how hard it can be to do it all on your own.”

    Justine felt as though Mr. Sizemore was referring to their “situation”. Everyone knew Sam was living with Justine in an apartment, in a complex. That was no secret. Everyone also knew that she was his legal guardian now. Justine sometimes felt like everyone was just waiting for her to fail. However, letting her brother enter the foster care system was not going to happen.

    “There is one more thing.” Mr. Sizemore interrupted. “Mrs. Bryant requests to see you in the office before you leave.”

    Justine nodded, “Thank you. Keep me updated on Sam, please.”

    “I sure will.” Mr. Sizemore stated and nodded Justine off to the front office. Sam was standing in the hall waiting for Justine when she walked out.

    “What did Mr. Sizemore say?” Sam asked.

    “Nothing. He just gave me your schedule and told me to visit the front office. Why?” Justine interrogated.

    “Everyone’s been asking about mom and dad. I just tell them there was an accident. I don’t know what else to say.” Sam said as he stopped with his back to the lockers that lined the wall.

    “You don’t have to tell them anything you don’t want to tell them, Sam.” Justine put her hand on Sam’s shoulder and looked into his eyes. She reminded him, “Everything’s going to be okay. I can feel it.” Sam nodded, and Justine gave him a tight hug. Then they made their way to the office.

    As they walked into the office, Justine looked at the secretary and said, “Mrs. Bryant” and before she could get the rest out, Mrs. Bryant interrupted her.

    “Oh, Justine. Please call me Jackie.”

Justine nodded. “Mr. Sizemore said you wanted to see me?”       

    “Yes. Please, step into my office.” Jackie said. Justine nodded and motioned for Sam to sit in one of the chairs in the front of the office. She had a feeling this was a more important matter from the look on Jackie’s sun-kissed face.       

     Jackie reminded Justine of an 80’s workout video instructor. She had the frizzy blonde hair, blue eye shadow, and bright pink lips. All that was missing was the tight blue workout suit and the bright pink leg warmers. Jackie’s office was very well-organized. A large window let an ambiance of light in that felt like the light beaming through the windows of a church.

    “Justine. How are you holding up?”

    Justine looked offended by Jackie’s question. Obviously, she was alive and surviving. Instead of replying back the way she wanted to, because she was so tired of being asked that question, Justine replied, “I’m doing good.”

    “I’m glad. Listen, Justine, I’m sorry about what happened and I’m sorry about what I’m about to say. But…. Your parents. They didn’t pay for your brother’s tuition this fall before, you know…” Jackie was trying to find the words before Justine interrupted.

    “They died?”

    “Yes. I’m sorry, Justine. If Sam’s tuition isn’t paid by Labor Day, the principal will be forced to expel him.” Jackie looked as if she wanted to say something else but the look on Justine’s face stopped all thought. Justine thought that her parents’ lawyer settled everything when the wills were read and the accounts were settled.

    “How much?” Justine asked.

    “Your parents paid $1000 over the amount of tuition due last year. So, that leaves $4,200 due this year.” Jackie exclaimed.

    Justine sank into her chair for a moment. How could her parents do this to her? How could they do this to Sam? She knew Sam would be heartbroken if he didn’t get to go to his school and hang out with his friends.

    “There are programs that I can submit his application to. Although, they won’t cover the entire balance, they could help. With your permission, of course.” Jackie stated, waiting for an answer.

Justine came out of her stupor for a moment to say, “Sure. Thanks. Is there anything else?”

    “That’s all” Jackie replied.

Justine took the account statement off of Jackie’s desk and headed out the door. Sam was sitting in the chair Justine asked him to sit in, in the main office.

    “Let’s go,” Justine said as she motioned Sam out of the large automatic doors.

    “What was that all about?” Sam asked.

Trying to make up something, Justine replied, “She just wanted to check on us. It was nothing.”

    Justine called for a cab. Luckily, there was one already dropping off a student and their parents. Justine hurried to the cab and hopped in, with Sam right behind her.

    “Rockridge Apartments, please.” Justine blurted as her head reeled. Sam was quiet. Justine was quiet. Even the cab driver was quiet. Justine didn’t know what to say to Sam. She didn’t know what to think. As she stared out the window of the cab, she watched the flood of people walking down the street. The cab came slowly to a stop.

    The cab driver stated, “It’s an accident ma’am. It’s going to be a minute.”

    Justine didn’t respond. She was trying to find anything to get her mind off of the fact that she had a little over a month to come up with $4,500. As she peered out the window, she noticed two young children, a girl and a boy, with their parents. They were walking out of an ice cream shop, the one her parents had taken her and her brother to many times before. How did they do it, she thought to herself. Who knew it was such a big responsibility taking care of a 12-year-old, let alone two small children. Justine felt angry and sad all at once. She still had some money left from her parent’s estate settlement to live on, but it wasn’t enough to pay for Sam’s tuition. Eventually, she knew she would have to find a job because the estate money wouldn’t last forever. She just never thought it would be this soon and the weight of the world would fall onto her shoulders this hard.

Chapter 2

    When Justine and Sam got home that afternoon, Justine told her brother she was going to lay down for a bit. Sam went into his room and began to play his his games. Justine crawled under her covers and rested her head on her pillow. Her mind was so full that she could only stare out the window to her bedroom. She was at a loss. A few moments later, she fell asleep.

    When Justine awoke, she was on the bus with her parents. It was a bright, beautiful sunny day. The bus was packed with students and their college professors. Justine was in the very back of the bus but could see her parents a few rows up. They were laughing and joking with their students. Other students were singing road-trip songs. Out of nowhere, there was a loud bang that sent the bus careening over the bridge. As the bus fell, her parents began helping students open their windows. When the bus hit the water, it was the loudest crash Justine had ever heard. She saw her parents open the emergency escape on the bus. They began forcing students out of the escape hatch one-by-one. As Justine watched, she noticed her parents running out of air and saw panic in their eyes. As they ushered the last student out of the hatch, the student’s foot closed the emergency hatch as he launched himself to survival. Justine panicked as she watched her parents struggle to open the hatch once more. They even tried to fit out of the windows but, by this time, they were out of air. While still holding her breath, Justine saw her father reach for her mother and fade first. As Justine’s mother held onto her husband, she began to fade also. Justine let out a scream as air bubbles came from her mouth.

    “Wake up! Wake up, Justine! Breathe!” Sam said as he tried to wake his sister. “You were turning blue!”

    “Sorry. Bad dream.” Justine hinted as she sat up in the bed.

    “You think? You should get checked out. That’s the third time this week.” Sam urged.

    “I’m fine, Sam!” She looked out the window. She saw it was now evening.

    “What do you want for supper?” She asked.

    “Definitely not what you had for breakfast.” Sam joked.

    “Haha, funny. How does pizza sound?”

    “Good,” Sam replied, as he exited the room.

    Justine grabbed the local paper. There was a new pizza place just a block away that delivered. She thought she saw their number in the advertisements section, but couldn’t remember it. Looking through the ads, Justine sorted through the “Wanted” section, the “Pets” section, and finally made it to the “services” section. She knew the ad had a picture of a pizza on it. As she browsed through the ads, she noticed people offered services for many things. There was a group of guys who offered leaf-raking services at “low prices,” florists who advertised, artists, and services for walking pets. Finally, Justine found the number and made the call. They promised the lowest prices on this side of the city, which was a plus for Justine. As soon as Justine put the phone down, there was a bang on the door. Her neighbor, Wanda Garrett, was demanding to be let in. Justine’s heart fell to her stomach wondering what could be wrong with Wanda today.

    As Justine opened the door, Wanda burst through with a baseball bat in her hand.

    “Who’s in here? I won’t ask you to show yourself twice!” Wanda shouted as she looked for an intruder. Wanda was an African American middle-aged bank teller with no children. She has a southern accent and dresses like she’s always ready for a close-up. Justine always refers to her as Wanda Sykes because she looks and acts just like her. There’s never a dull moment when Wanda is around.

    “Wanda, geeze. Calm down.” Justine blurted. “There’s no one else here but Sam and myself. What are you doing?”

    “I came to whoop up on anyone that tried to hurt you babies. I heard screaming and yelling coming from above, and I knew it wasn’t the Lord because even he’s not that loud.” Wanda stated.

    “Well, thank you for your concern, but we’re fine here. It was just a bad dream.” Justine announced.

    “Well,”  Wanda mocked.  “I’m certainly glad you all are fine. Isn’t that the third time this week, sugar?”

Justine gave Wanda a look as if to say, “How do you know?”

    Wanda smiled. She’s been looking after Justine and Sam ever since they moved into the apartment above her. Justine always reiterates that they are fine, but Wanda insists. Frankly, Justine likes Wanda. It gives her someone close by that she knows and can trust. Wanda has kept an eye on Sam several times while Justine was handling their parent’s affairs. She also has made food for Justine and her brother on many occasions. Justine thinks of Wanda as the crazy aunt she never had.

    “When you live above me, there’s not much I miss. Come here, baby. Do you need to talk?” Wanda asked.

    “I’m fine.” Justine insisted.

Wanda knew she wasn’t fine. Wanda had seen this look in her eye before. She knew something was wrong but couldn’t tell what.

    “Okay. I guess I’ll waltz back down to my lonely, cold, dark apartment, eating what crumbs I had left from breakfast yesterday… until… you… tell… me…”

    “Okay!” Justine interrupted, staring at Wanda from the door of the apartment. “I’ll tell you. But Sam cannot know. Come to my room.”

    Wanda hurried back up the steps where she had just made a dramatic exit to beg for information. As they entered Justine’s room, a cool breeze blew through Justine’s window. Her hot pink curtains waved in the breeze. To the left of the room were Justine’s closet and dresser with a mirror on top. Straight ahead was her bed under her window. To the right was her night stand with a matching hot pink lamp shade. Justine and Wanda sat on her bed.

    “It was the accident, again,” Justine admitted.

    “Oh, poor baby. What was it like this time?” Wanda replied.

    “Just like all of the other ones. I was on the bus with them. The bus ran off the bridge. They helped everyone off the bus. In the end, they couldn’t help themselves.” Justine held it all in as she was just about to break. “And on top of all of that. I have to pay $4,200 to Sam’s school before Labor Day, or he will have to go to public school.”

    “You need to calm down,” Wanda said as she held Justine. “Lord knows, baby, none of us have a choice in the hand we’re dealt. But, it’s how we handle that hand that defines us, and our life.”

    “What do I do?” Justine asked. I can’t come up with that kind of money in a month unless I…”

    “Don’t even go there!” Wanda interrupted. “No one ever got ahead in the world by sacrificing their dignity. There are lots of things you can do. Are you good at anything?”

    “What kind of question is that!?” Justine sarcastically replied.

    “I mean, do you have a hobby? Is there something you can make and sell? Is there a job that pays well, that you’re qualified for?” Wanda interrogated.

    “No. I only have a high school diploma. I promised my parents I would finish college this year, but with everything that happened, I dropped out. And I’m not crafty if that’s what you mean. I had never even washed my own clothes, till..” Justine faded as she spoke.

    Wiping a tear from her eye, Wanda assured her.

    “Oh, sweetie. Just think about it tonight. Taking one day to yourself won’t hurt. I promise.” Wanda exclaimed.

Just then the doorbell rang. Justine told Wanda it was the pizza delivery. As they made their way into the kitchen, Wanda grabbed her baseball bat to take back with her to her apartment.

    “Are you sure you don’t want this?” Wanda asked.

    “I’m good. I promise.” Justine said with a giggle.

Wanda opened the door to find the delivery boy in a panic. She forgot she was holding her baseball bat in the air. She smiled and quickly hid it behind her back and slid by the delivery boy yelling goodbye to Sam and Justine. Justine paid the delivery guy for her pizza and quickly shut the door.

    “That Wanda is something else, isn’t she?” Sam stated, with his mouth full of pizza.

    Justine took a good look at her brother as he was sitting across from her. His blonde “bowl cut” reminded her of when he played pee-wee football as a child. She admired how his “baby teeth” were replaced by large adult teeth that looked too big for his mouth. His freckles and blue eyes also weren’t hard to miss. Justine was always jealous of the natural tan her brother had acquired from their father. She thought about how differently she was forced to look at her brother. Before the accident, she and Sam had the typical brother-sister relationship. She would yell at him when he messed with things in her room. He would yell at her when she would hog the television. Back then, he was this annoying brat her parents forced her to live with. Now that her parents are gone, Justine felt as though the relationship between her and Sam had become friendlier. Although they do have their arguments, it’s different now.

    “That she is. I don’t know what we would do without her, though.” Justine replied.

     “I don’t know what I would do without her cherry cobbler.” Sam grinned.

    After supper, Sam took a shower and went into his room to play his games. Then Justine took a shower, told Sam good night and crawled back into bed. After going through her head about the possible ways to earn money, Justine decided to pick up the sales paper again to see if there were any “help wanted” or “get rich quick” ads. After flipping again through the ads, she saw that office jobs were paying minimum wage. At that rate, she could have enough to match what she has saved in a few months, but that wasn’t good enough. There was an ad searching for experienced sales representatives. Justine thought to herself, If I had gone to college, as my parents advised me to, I could do this. Feeling discouraged, she swore to look at only one more page before turning off the light on her nightstand. She sifted through items that people were looking for, items people had for sale, and “buyer beware” posts. Just as she was about to set down the paper, she saw an advertisement for visitors. It read:

Manhattan Travel Escort Agency

     Have you ever wanted to visit New York City with someone who knows this city like the back of their hand? Look no further! The Manhattan Travel Escort Agency has been serving the New York City area for more than ten years. Not only do we organize an itinerary for your stay, but we also accompany you to all of your destinations! We’re like your own personal tour guide for the city. We have deluxe packages starting at $3,000 for four days. Contact us for more information at 1-800-Man-Hatn or visit our website for specific pricing and extensive details.

    Astonished, Justine dropped the paper on her lap. She thought to herself, people pay this kind of money for someone to follow them around the city? You’ve got to be kidding me. Looking for more information, Justine pulled up the site on her laptop. Part of her didn’t believe it. And another part of her hoped it was true. As she scrolled through the site, she read the reviews. There were thousands upon thousands of comments stating how much this agency helped them. Justine thought to herself again, I’ve lived here all my life. I could show some tourists around for half as much as this company offers. Excited, she pulls up the ads section online, to add her own ad. Biting her nails, nervous about if she really wanted to “put herself out there” like that, she began to type.

    If you’re visiting New York City, or want to learn more about our beloved city, make sure you have me by your side! I will set up an itinerary tailored to fit your needs and accompany you to all of your scheduled destinations. Best rates in the city! Call 842-745-8888 to schedule today, or email me at JustWilson@yahoo.com.

Justine read over her ad and contemplated submitting it. She thought, What if I’m kidnapped? What if it’s a setup and I end up dead? What if… In the tornado of thoughts that circled her mind, she quickly clicked “submit”.

Thank you for taking the time to read this excerpt from the book. Please remember, this is the final draft, but is subject to subtle changes before it is published.   

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About a Book: Escorting Mr. Colburn By Marlena Owens

I just published a book called Escorting Mr. Colburn. It is available on Amazon in paperback and eBook form. Many of my friends and family have purchased it. I can’t wait to hear what they have to say about it!

I got the idea for this book a few years ago but didn’t get the courage to finally finish it until recently. I would like to compare publishing your first book to riding home from the hospital with your first baby. You don’t know what to expect, you feel vulnerable, and you’re responsible for what you’ve created. I have always enjoyed writing but it took me gaining confidence in myself before I could share it with others.

About the book:

Justine lives in New York City with her brother, Sam. Their parents just passed tragically a few months before in a bus accident. As if life can’t get any harder, Sam’s school tuition is due in one month. With the help of her energetic and unique neighbor, Wanda, Justine explores her options. She doesn’t have any hobbies and isn’t very crafty. However, she knows the city like the back of her hand. Then she had the idea to start a personal travel agent business. Justine would accompany tourists to their destinations and be their personal tour guide. Yet, when she places her ad, she only gets one reply. Little did she know, that’s the only reply she would need!

Come on a journey with me, exploring the 3 most well-known destinations to visit in New York City!

This novel explores the process of grief and how our loved ones speak to us even after they’re gone. It also digs into living with regret after the death of a loved one. Lastly, this novel shows that one can find beauty in moving on. I hope you enjoy it.

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Escorting Mr. Colburn

Marlena Owens

 

Chapter 1

    “Taxi. Taxi,” Justine yelled as she ran along the side of the street with her 12-year-old brother, Sam, in tow. Feeling hopeless as she had already spilled her coffee, burned her forehead with her straightener, and slipped on one of Sam’s model cars, Justine was sure catching a taxi was the least of her worries.

    “Justine! We’re going to be late!” Sam reminded her, for the fifth time.

    “I know, Sam. I’m trying.” Justine’s exhausted look turned to a smile knowing that finally, a taxi had stopped. “Jump in!” She told him.

    “Where to, Miss?” The cab driver asked.

    “Prescott Middle, please,” Justine replied. She and Sam made themselves comfy for the ride.

    Justine loved the city. The smells weren’t always pleasant, but she loved the rush. The busyness of Manhattan. There was always someone going somewhere and doing something in this big city. Looking out the window, she admired the tall buildings that she had grown up around. Thinking of these buildings and her childhood made her think of her parents. She missed them. She knew Sam missed them too. She thought about the way her mother always gave her the best hugs. She thought about how her father always made sure she was up-to-par on her swing. She remembered life the way it was. A tear fell from her eye, but as fast as it fell, she wiped it away. Sam was looking out his window too. Justine supposed he was nervous.

    “Are you okay?” Justine asked.

    “I guess.”

    “Seventh grade won’t be so bad.” She reassured him.

    “I guess not. At least I get to go to my school and not a different one.”  

    “You let me worry about that, Sam. Are you excited to meet your teacher?”

    “Mr. Sizemore? He coached me in pee-wee football, don’t you remember?”

    “I’m sorry, I don’t.” She told him. But my mother would have, she thought to herself.

    “How much longer, Amir?” Justine asked the cab driver. Amir was a cab driver that Justine had ridden with many times. He is Indian, but he loves it here in The States. He immigrated from India as a young boy, with his parents. Justine loves to ride with Amir because of his accent and his stories.

    “I’d say about 10 minutes if this light would ever change, Miss Justine,” Amir replied.

    “Do you have any good stories today?” Sam asked Amir.

    “Why, sure I do. Did you ever hear about the Indian woman who ate the cow?” He joked.

    “Nope,” Sam said.

    “She became a God. That’s why we’re not allowed to eat our special cows. HA HA HA!”

    Sam and Justine didn’t understand Amir’s culture but made a slight laugh of the dry humor anyway. Their mother and father rode with Amir quite often, too. Amir knew just how to put a smile on their mother’s face.  

    “You know, a cow almost took my leg one time. I was walking the street and slipped on a pot and my leg fell into the cow’s mouth. Luckily, the cow was asleep and didn’t even wake up!” Amir giggled.

    “That was a good one, Amir,” Justine said.

    “Here you are, Miss,” Amir announced.

Justine opened the door, paid Amir, and waited for Sam to exit the car. Prescott Middle School was a large private school on the other end of Manhattan. Kids and their parents were flooding the school. Today is the day the students get to meet their teachers, receive their class schedules, and their supply lists for each class. Justine knew Sam was excited about seeing his friends again. A lot had happened over the summer. Luckily, with Sam going back to school, Justine could find a job and start bringing in income. The only thing that suffered in Justine’s life was her college experience. She dropped out when her parents passed away a few months ago. It was impossible for her to make funeral arrangements, take care of her brother, and manage her parents’ estate.

    Sam ran by Justine to greet some of his friends.

    “I’m going to find Mr. Sizemore. I’ll call you when I’m finished.” Justine told Sam. He nodded, as he was too busy to talk to his sister now. He had some much needed catching up to do with his friends.

    Justine walked through the tall automatic doors. It felt, to her, as if she was entering a mall. Unfortunately, it wasn’t. She walked into the front office to get directions from the office secretary.

    “Can I help you?” The secretary asked.

Justine looked down at the name tag on the secretary’s desk. It read Jackie Bryant.

    “Mrs. Bryant, Could you tell me where Mr. Sizemore’s office is?” Justine asked.

   “Sure. He’s in room 223, down the hall and to the right. If you reach the stairs, you’ve gone too far.” Mrs. Bryant replied.

   “Thank you,” Justine replied and set off to find Mr. Sizemore’s classroom. The halls were wide and seemed like they went on forever. Justine turned the corner and saw the stairs. Immediately to the right was Mr. Sizemore standing in the doorway to his classroom.

    “Hey, Justine. How are you? He asked.

    “Just the person I wanted to see. I’m doing great. Sam is in your class this year.”  

    “I noticed. How is he holding up?”

    “He’s okay,” Justine said. “He’s excited to get back into school. He missed his friends over the summer, which felt like an eternity.”

    “I’m sure it did.” Mr. Sizemore said. “Here is his class schedule and his supply list. I don’t require much for my students, but if you need help with anything, just let me know. I know how hard it can be to do it all on your own.”

    Justine felt as though Mr. Sizemore was referring to their “situation”. Everyone knew Sam was living with Justine in an apartment, in a complex. That was no secret. Everyone also knew that she was his legal guardian now. Justine sometimes felt like everyone was just waiting for her to fail. However, letting her brother enter the foster care system was not going to happen.

    “There is one more thing.” Mr. Sizemore interrupted. “Mrs. Bryant requests to see you in the office before you leave.”

    Justine nodded, “Thank you. Keep me updated on Sam, please.”

    “I sure will.” Mr. Sizemore stated and nodded Justine off to the front office. Sam was standing in the hall waiting for Justine when she walked out.

    “What did Mr. Sizemore say?” Sam asked.

    “Nothing. He just gave me your schedule and told me to visit the front office. Why?” Justine interrogated.

    “Everyone’s been asking about mom and dad. I just tell them there was an accident. I don’t know what else to say.” Sam said as he stopped with his back to the lockers that lined the wall.

    “You don’t have to tell them anything you don’t want to tell them, Sam.” Justine put her hand on Sam’s shoulder and looked into his eyes. She reminded him, “Everything’s going to be okay. I can feel it.” Sam nodded, and Justine gave him a tight hug. Then they made their way to the office.

    As they walked into the office, Justine looked at the secretary and said, “Mrs. Bryant” and before she could get the rest out, Mrs. Bryant interrupted her.

    “Oh, Justine. Please call me Jackie.”

Justine nodded. “Mr. Sizemore said you wanted to see me?”       

    “Yes. Please, step into my office.” Jackie said. Justine nodded and motioned for Sam to sit in one of the chairs in the front of the office. She had a feeling this was a more important matter from the look on Jackie’s sun-kissed face.       

     Jackie reminded Justine of an 80’s workout video instructor. She had the frizzy blonde hair, blue eye shadow, and bright pink lips. All that was missing was the tight blue workout suit and the bright pink leg warmers. Jackie’s office was very well-organized. A large window let an ambiance of light in that felt like the light beaming through the windows of a church.

    “Justine. How are you holding up?”

    Justine looked offended by Jackie’s question. Obviously, she was alive and surviving. Instead of replying back the way she wanted to, because she was so tired of being asked that question, Justine replied, “I’m doing good.”

    “I’m glad. Listen, Justine, I’m sorry about what happened and I’m sorry about what I’m about to say. But…. Your parents. They didn’t pay for your brother’s tuition this fall before, you know…” Jackie was trying to find the words before Justine interrupted.

    “They died?”

    “Yes. I’m sorry, Justine. If Sam’s tuition isn’t paid by Labor Day, the principal will be forced to expel him.” Jackie looked as if she wanted to say something else but the look on Justine’s face stopped all thought. Justine thought that her parents’ lawyer settled everything when the wills were read and the accounts were settled.

    “How much?” Justine asked.

    “Your parents paid $1000 over the amount of tuition due last year. So, that leaves $4,200 due this year.” Jackie exclaimed.

    Justine sank into her chair for a moment. How could her parents do this to her? How could they do this to Sam? She knew Sam would be heartbroken if he didn’t get to go to his school and hang out with his friends.

    “There are programs that I can submit his application to. Although, they won’t cover the entire balance, they could help. With your permission, of course.” Jackie stated, waiting for an answer.

Justine came out of her stupor for a moment to say, “Sure. Thanks. Is there anything else?”

    “That’s all” Jackie replied.

Justine took the account statement off of Jackie’s desk and headed out the door. Sam was sitting in the chair Justine asked him to sit in, in the main office.

    “Let’s go,” Justine said as she motioned Sam out of the large automatic doors.

    “What was that all about?” Sam asked.

Trying to make up something, Justine replied, “She just wanted to check on us. It was nothing.”

    Justine called for a cab. Luckily, there was one already dropping off a student and their parents. Justine hurried to the cab and hopped in, with Sam right behind her.

    “Rockridge Apartments, please.” Justine blurted as her head reeled. Sam was quiet. Justine was quiet. Even the cab driver was quiet. Justine didn’t know what to say to Sam. She didn’t know what to think. As she stared out the window of the cab, she watched the flood of people walking down the street. The cab came slowly to a stop.

    The cab driver stated, “It’s an accident ma’am. It’s going to be a minute.”

    Justine didn’t respond. She was trying to find anything to get her mind off of the fact that she had a little over a month to come up with $4,500. As she peered out the window, she noticed two young children, a girl and a boy, with their parents. They were walking out of an ice cream shop, the one her parents had taken her and her brother to many times before. How did they do it, she thought to herself. Who knew it was such a big responsibility taking care of a 12-year-old, let alone two small children. Justine felt angry and sad all at once. She still had some money left from her parent’s estate settlement to live on, but it wasn’t enough to pay for Sam’s tuition. Eventually, she knew she would have to find a job because the estate money wouldn’t last forever. She just never thought it would be this soon and the weight of the world would fall onto her shoulders this hard.

Chapter 2

    When Justine and Sam got home that afternoon, Justine told her brother she was going to lay down for a bit. Sam went into his room and began to play his his games. Justine crawled under her covers and rested her head on her pillow. Her mind was so full that she could only stare out the window to her bedroom. She was at a loss. A few moments later, she fell asleep.

    When Justine awoke, she was on the bus with her parents. It was a bright, beautiful sunny day. The bus was packed with students and their college professors. Justine was in the very back of the bus but could see her parents a few rows up. They were laughing and joking with their students. Other students were singing road-trip songs. Out of nowhere, there was a loud bang that sent the bus careening over the bridge. As the bus fell, her parents began helping students open their windows. When the bus hit the water, it was the loudest crash Justine had ever heard. She saw her parents open the emergency escape on the bus. They began forcing students out of the escape hatch one-by-one. As Justine watched, she noticed her parents running out of air and saw panic in their eyes. As they ushered the last student out of the hatch, the student’s foot closed the emergency hatch as he launched himself to survival. Justine panicked as she watched her parents struggle to open the hatch once more. They even tried to fit out of the windows but, by this time, they were out of air. While still holding her breath, Justine saw her father reach for her mother and fade first. As Justine’s mother held onto her husband, she began to fade also. Justine let out a scream as air bubbles came from her mouth.

    “Wake up! Wake up, Justine! Breathe!” Sam said as he tried to wake his sister. “You were turning blue!”

    “Sorry. Bad dream.” Justine hinted as she sat up in the bed.

    “You think? You should get checked out. That’s the third time this week.” Sam urged.

    “I’m fine, Sam!” She looked out the window. She saw it was now evening.

    “What do you want for supper?” She asked.

    “Definitely not what you had for breakfast.” Sam joked.

    “Haha, funny. How does pizza sound?”

    “Good,” Sam replied, as he exited the room.

    Justine grabbed the local paper. There was a new pizza place just a block away that delivered. She thought she saw their number in the advertisements section, but couldn’t remember it. Looking through the ads, Justine sorted through the “Wanted” section, the “Pets” section, and finally made it to the “services” section. She knew the ad had a picture of a pizza on it. As she browsed through the ads, she noticed people offered services for many things. There was a group of guys who offered leaf-raking services at “low prices,” florists who advertised, artists, and services for walking pets. Finally, Justine found the number and made the call. They promised the lowest prices on this side of the city, which was a plus for Justine. As soon as Justine put the phone down, there was a bang on the door. Her neighbor, Wanda Garrett, was demanding to be let in. Justine’s heart fell to her stomach wondering what could be wrong with Wanda today.

    As Justine opened the door, Wanda burst through with a baseball bat in her hand.

    “Who’s in here? I won’t ask you to show yourself twice!” Wanda shouted as she looked for an intruder. Wanda was an African American middle-aged bank teller with no children. She has a southern accent and dresses like she’s always ready for a close-up. Justine always refers to her as Wanda Sykes because she looks and acts just like her. There’s never a dull moment when Wanda is around.

    “Wanda, geeze. Calm down.” Justine blurted. “There’s no one else here but Sam and myself. What are you doing?”

    “I came to whoop up on anyone that tried to hurt you babies. I heard screaming and yelling coming from above, and I knew it wasn’t the Lord because even he’s not that loud.” Wanda stated.

    “Well, thank you for your concern, but we’re fine here. It was just a bad dream.” Justine announced.

    “Well,”  Wanda mocked.  “I’m certainly glad you all are fine. Isn’t that the third time this week, sugar?”

Justine gave Wanda a look as if to say, “How do you know?”

    Wanda smiled. She’s been looking after Justine and Sam ever since they moved into the apartment above her. Justine always reiterates that they are fine, but Wanda insists. Frankly, Justine likes Wanda. It gives her someone close by that she knows and can trust. Wanda has kept an eye on Sam several times while Justine was handling their parent’s affairs. She also has made food for Justine and her brother on many occasions. Justine thinks of Wanda as the crazy aunt she never had.

    “When you live above me, there’s not much I miss. Come here, baby. Do you need to talk?” Wanda asked.

    “I’m fine.” Justine insisted.

Wanda knew she wasn’t fine. Wanda had seen this look in her eye before. She knew something was wrong but couldn’t tell what.

    “Okay. I guess I’ll waltz back down to my lonely, cold, dark apartment, eating what crumbs I had left from breakfast yesterday… until… you… tell… me…”

    “Okay!” Justine interrupted, staring at Wanda from the door of the apartment. “I’ll tell you. But Sam cannot know. Come to my room.”

    Wanda hurried back up the steps where she had just made a dramatic exit to beg for information. As they entered Justine’s room, a cool breeze blew through Justine’s window. Her hot pink curtains waved in the breeze. To the left of the room were Justine’s closet and dresser with a mirror on top. Straight ahead was her bed under her window. To the right was her night stand with a matching hot pink lamp shade. Justine and Wanda sat on her bed.

    “It was the accident, again,” Justine admitted.

    “Oh, poor baby. What was it like this time?” Wanda replied.

    “Just like all of the other ones. I was on the bus with them. The bus ran off the bridge. They helped everyone off the bus. In the end, they couldn’t help themselves.” Justine held it all in as she was just about to break. “And on top of all of that. I have to pay $4,200 to Sam’s school before Labor Day, or he will have to go to public school.”

    “You need to calm down,” Wanda said as she held Justine. “Lord knows, baby, none of us have a choice in the hand we’re dealt. But, it’s how we handle that hand that defines us, and our life.”

    “What do I do?” Justine asked. I can’t come up with that kind of money in a month unless I…”

    “Don’t even go there!” Wanda interrupted. “No one ever got ahead in the world by sacrificing their dignity. There are lots of things you can do. Are you good at anything?”

    “What kind of question is that!?” Justine sarcastically replied.

    “I mean, do you have a hobby? Is there something you can make and sell? Is there a job that pays well, that you’re qualified for?” Wanda interrogated.

    “No. I only have a high school diploma. I promised my parents I would finish college this year, but with everything that happened, I dropped out. And I’m not crafty if that’s what you mean. I had never even washed my own clothes, till..” Justine faded as she spoke.

    Wiping a tear from her eye, Wanda assured her.

    “Oh, sweetie. Just think about it tonight. Taking one day to yourself won’t hurt. I promise.” Wanda exclaimed.

Just then the doorbell rang. Justine told Wanda it was the pizza delivery. As they made their way into the kitchen, Wanda grabbed her baseball bat to take back with her to her apartment.

    “Are you sure you don’t want this?” Wanda asked.

    “I’m good. I promise.” Justine said with a giggle.

Wanda opened the door to find the delivery boy in a panic. She forgot she was holding her baseball bat in the air. She smiled and quickly hid it behind her back and slid by the delivery boy yelling goodbye to Sam and Justine. Justine paid the delivery guy for her pizza and quickly shut the door.

    “That Wanda is something else, isn’t she?” Sam stated, with his mouth full of pizza.

    Justine took a good look at her brother as he was sitting across from her. His blonde “bowl cut” reminded her of when he played pee-wee football as a child. She admired how his “baby teeth” were replaced by large adult teeth that looked too big for his mouth. His freckles and blue eyes also weren’t hard to miss. Justine was always jealous of the natural tan her brother had acquired from their father. She thought about how differently she was forced to look at her brother. Before the accident, she and Sam had the typical brother-sister relationship. She would yell at him when he messed with things in her room. He would yell at her when she would hog the television. Back then, he was this annoying brat her parents forced her to live with. Now that her parents are gone, Justine felt as though the relationship between her and Sam had become friendlier. Although they do have their arguments, it’s different now.

    “That she is. I don’t know what we would do without her, though.” Justine replied.

     “I don’t know what I would do without her cherry cobbler.” Sam grinned.

    After supper, Sam took a shower and went into his room to play his games. Then Justine took a shower, told Sam good night and crawled back into bed. After going through her head about the possible ways to earn money, Justine decided to pick up the sales paper again to see if there were any “help wanted” or “get rich quick” ads. After flipping again through the ads, she saw that office jobs were paying minimum wage. At that rate, she could have enough to match what she has saved in a few months, but that wasn’t good enough. There was an ad searching for experienced sales representatives. Justine thought to herself, If I had gone to college, as my parents advised me to, I could do this. Feeling discouraged, she swore to look at only one more page before turning off the light on her nightstand. She sifted through items that people were looking for, items people had for sale, and “buyer beware” posts. Just as she was about to set down the paper, she saw an advertisement for visitors. It read:

Manhattan Travel Escort Agency

     Have you ever wanted to visit New York City with someone who knows this city like the back of their hand? Look no further! The Manhattan Travel Escort Agency has been serving the New York City area for more than ten years. Not only do we organize an itinerary for your stay, but we also accompany you to all of your destinations! We’re like your own personal tour guide for the city. We have deluxe packages starting at $3,000 for four days. Contact us for more information at 1-800-Man-Hatn or visit our website for specific pricing and extensive details.

    Astonished, Justine dropped the paper on her lap. She thought to herself, people pay this kind of money for someone to follow them around the city? You’ve got to be kidding me. Looking for more information, Justine pulled up the site on her laptop. Part of her didn’t believe it. And another part of her hoped it was true. As she scrolled through the site, she read the reviews. There were thousands upon thousands of comments stating how much this agency helped them. Justine thought to herself again, I’ve lived here all my life. I could show some tourists around for half as much as this company offers. Excited, she pulls up the ads section online, to add her own ad. Biting her nails, nervous about if she really wanted to “put herself out there” like that, she began to type.

    If you’re visiting New York City, or want to learn more about our beloved city, make sure you have me by your side! I will set up an itinerary tailored to fit your needs and accompany you to all of your scheduled destinations. Best rates in the city! Call 842-745-8888 to schedule today, or email me at JustWilson@yahoo.com.

Justine read over her ad and contemplated submitting it. She thought, What if I’m kidnapped? What if it’s a setup and I end up dead? What if… In the tornado of thoughts that circled her mind, she quickly clicked “submit”.

Thank you for taking the time to read this excerpt from the book. Please remember, this is the final draft, but is subject to subtle changes before it is published.   

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Hey, Y’all! I Wrote a Book!

Hey, y’all!

Long time no see! Surprise! I wrote a book! Like my Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/MarlenaOwensAuthor/

for more information, to connect with me, and to stay up to date on what I’ll be working on next!

I hope you’ll enjoy this book. It is called Escorting Mr. Colburn.

Justine is no average 26 year old. She’s a college drop out dealing with the recent death of her parents while having to care for her eleven year old brother named Sam. In a moment of desperation to pay for his school tuition, she decides to start a travel escorting business where she accompanies customers to destinations around New York City for a set fee. However, she only gets one reply. But, little does she know, this is the only reply she will need!

This book is appropriate for ages 16 and up. It relates to the younger generation (late teens to late twenties), but can be enjoyed by anyone as my characters are various ages.

I take in many influences when writing. Some of my favorite current authors include: Jodi Picoult, W. M. Paul Young, Nicholas Sparks, and James Patterson.

I also have many favorite famous “older” authors such as Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe, William Faulkner, Jane Austen, Charles Dickens, Nathaniel Hawthorne, among many others.

I hope you will connect with me on this journey and I hope to hear from you soon!

Escorting Mr. Colburn is available for pre-order until June 29th, 2018. After that date, it will be available for purchase!

Happy reading!

 

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5 Movies to Watch This Halloween (That You May Have Never Seen)

Those that know me, know I LOVE fall and Halloween. I am also a lover of movies. I love movies that leave you stunned in the end. I love movies that keep you on the edge of your seat. But, most importantly, I love movies that have a story behind the horror and that make you think! Movies that keep you guessing to the end, and even after, are the best! So, without further ado, here are five movies that you may not have seen, but that you should, this Halloween!

  1. The Grave Dancers

This movie is categorized under horror and suspense on Amazon. If you have Amazon Prime, it’s your lucky day, because this movie is available free to Prime members. The movie starts out with the passing of a character, which takes a group of friends to a cemetery. To commemorate their dead friend, they get drunk and dance on different graves in the cemetery. This movie reiterates the saying “never walk on a grave”, because when they characters do, they experience consequences related to the individuals’ graves on which they stepped upon. If you are looking for a great suspense that has a great story line, this movie is just right for you!

2. Forget Me Not

This movie is categorized under horror on Amazon. For some reason, it is not available there, but I am sure it is available to watch elsewhere. This movie is great because it also has a great story line that comes full circle and has you on the edge of your seat during the entire film. It starts out showing a girl who is kept alive via a ventilator. Later on in the film, you find out why she is on a ventilator, and why the main character’s friends keep disappearing. In the end, the movie comes full circle and you are left speechless. This movie is perfect for the Halloween season. I would not suggest watching this alone, or at least I wouldn’t.

3. After.Life

Amazon categorizes this movie under drama and suspense. This movie will also keep you on the edge of your seat and guessing until the very end. The main character, played by the queen of horror herself, Christina Ricci, is in a terrible car accident and finds herself waking up in a funeral home. The funeral director, played by the legendary Liam Neeson, is preparing her for her funeral. For the remainder of her time with him, the audience is kept guessing whether she is actually still alive or if she has indeed passed on. Her boyfriend, played by the famous Justin Long, also searches for answers into her death and believes she is still alive. The end of this movie will leave you with more questions than answers, but it is definitely a crowd-pleaser all year, especially during the Halloween season!

4. When Good Ghouls Go Bad

When Good Ghouls Go Bad

Amazon actually categorizes this movie as a comedy, although it is so much more than that. A young boy finds himself in a town where a curse keeps everyone in that town from celebrating Halloween. If you ask me, it has a Hocus Pocus meets Ernest Scared Stupid vibe to it. It is more for children, but has a great storyline that comes full-circle in the end. For all the adults who love movies like Hocus Pocus, Halloween Town, and many famous others, this should definitely be included in your watch list this Halloween season!

5. Dragonfly

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Amazon has this 2002 film categorized as a drama and romance. However, it is more suspenseful than anything! This movie has an awesome plot that takes you on twists and turns the entire movie. The resolution is AMAZING! Kevin Costner plays the husband of a doctor who goes missing on a missions trip. She was 8 months pregnant. To deal with the pain of her loss, he visits her patients at the local hospital who show him strange symbols that look like a dragonfly. Costner becomes haunted by dragonflies and these symbols, seeing them everywhere. One day, he finds a map of the last place she was seen and lo and behold, there the symbol is! So, Costner travels to the place on the map to find his wife. The end will BLOW YOUR MIND! It reminds us of the power of love and the invisible binds that tie us all together, even after death.

I hope you enjoyed reading about these lesser-known, but yet just-as-good movies, that I love to watch this time of year! I would love to know what you think of them after you watch them. If you have any movie suggestions, I would love to check them out!

Grab a bowl of candy, snuggle up in your favorite blanket, and prepare to be taken for a ride! These movies will have you on the edge of your seat. Some will leave you with more questions than answers. Best of all, these movies will make you THINK! Thank you for reading! Keep it spooky, y’all!

Until next time,

Marlena Owens

Author Marlena Owens Partners With PhillySwirl

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Hey, everyone! I hope you all are doing well! I have some great news that will help me and the company I am partnering with!

I am very excited to announce that I have partnered with a product that I absolutely love and believe in! PhillySwirl cups are delicious, super smooth Italian Ice that comes with a flavored spoon!

I contacted this company about a week ago professing my love for their delicious treat, to which they replied:

So, as soon as I receive the premium items, my family and I will take pictures of us enjoying our favorite frozen treat (which is not hard at all to do) and I will write a beautiful blog post explaining why I love this product, and why you should too! The theme of the post and photos will go along with PhillySwirl’s campaign, “Swirl Up Your Imagination,” which I think is wonderful for their target audience, children.

If you haven’t tried any of PhillySwirl’s products, I highly recommend you do so! I fell in love with this product over a year ago and still buy it every time I go to the grocery store. It’s a sweet treat that my babies and I can enjoy together! There is no high fructose corn syrup, it requires no spoons (because they’re included #momwin), and they’re only 100 calories per cup.

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I am very excited for this experience, as the blog post and photos will be shared on all of PhillySwirl’s social media and websites, as well as mine!

I’ll keep you all updated. In the mean time, treat yourself and your kids to PhillySwirl products! Let your tastebuds, and the smiles on your babies’ faces, speak for themselves!

PhillySwirl is such a generous and kind company, who has provided me with an opportunity that is not easy to come by. Therefore, I would like to shout a huge “THANK YOU!!” to this awesome company and to those who have read my books, encouraged, and supported me throughout the many projects I have taken on in my life.

As always, thank you for reading!

Much love,

Marlena Owens

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